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Old 10-15-2005, 03:11 PM   #10
Rap Name: SkiLLs
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Default Re: need critizicm

good looks, def keep in mind, and for the structure on the second verse i didnt really organize it, just a bunch of old battle verses and stuff thats wy its not 2 original like dena said, but thanx for the info b, i needed someone to tell me this shit strait up
"i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
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