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Old 05-22-2012, 05:27 PM   #7
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Haha, cool rhymes man. Not sure what your story is. Some of this seems serious and then at other times it seems like you're taking the piss. I found some of this shit quite humouress but at the same time you threw down some pretty interesting lines. Entertaining in any case. Good flow for the most part too.
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