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Old 12-30-2012, 06:43 AM   #4
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Obey shaolin monk

the cost never decreases, the law of Offices and the Streets
Watchmen falter in the face of becoming the Fallen or simply men of peace
when the real menace is behind the mirror's streaks

Best part imo. Honestly for feed back though i thought it was a little too much adjective then noun or adverb then verb, with no solid story behind the piece. With that said you had some good ideas and a broad vocab

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Originally Posted by Big L
I'm undefeated that's the stone truth
Cause battlin' me is like fightin' a gorilla in a phone booth
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