im a give you my honest critique
you got a good voice (meaning it doesnt make me wanna cut the track off) but you gotta work on ennunciation. a lot of the words slur together and i cant really understand what you saying. this might be part of the flow too, i think you should slow it down a little, a lotta times it sounds forced.
hook is aight, mic presence is strait. bars are good enough. nothing quotable but nothing embarassing. hook had the best lyrics in all honesty.
ultimately i like the beat more than the rap. keep doing you, keep working. 1.