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Old 03-09-2013, 09:12 PM   #9
Father N Dangerous
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nice scripts solid vocab, and u have good structure so keep that shit up

this was my fav line in the last verse

high tolerance treatment invoked,
each demon that spoke became the voices of ghosts

thougth that this bar was cool i liked it good read
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