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Old 10-24-2005, 11:33 AM   #199
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Default Re: The Official Poetry Thread

Originally Posted by Legato
when i sit and stare at you all i can think of is how i never see you.
Your body covered from head to to with make up, jewerly and designer clothes.
when i undress you to make love tattoos of jail bars surrounded by butterflys hide your soul.
inching my hands over your body from your breasts to your toes trying to get a feel of the real, the untainted beauty that i see so deep withing your eye's the sames eye's that i wipe tears from at night when you cry. everyday is a new day so everyday can bring a fresh approach to life. and as we open our eye's to the sunrise open yourself to me and let me inside.

bong bong.
feeling this... imagery is amazing, and so is the language...
i just had to say that.

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