I listen to the stuff posted here, and either I don't feel qualified to give a criticism, or I enjoy the tracks and move on.
I checked your soundcloud and it sounds like a no-flow, less vibin Paris. At least he was rappin about somn and you could groove to the shit doe. Maybe I'm just not a fan of the stream of consciousness wannabe killer bee style you've adopted right nah
"Socialism is the people. If you afraid of socialism, you afraid of yourself"
- Fred Sanford, Chairman of the Black Panther Party, Illinois Chapter