Beat - I didn't really like the beat. I understand the type of beat it is, but it felt a little too disorganized (could be the intend purpose).
Hook - Hook was basic, but I felt it was effective for the whole song's gritty vibe. But I feel that the verses ending were a little too abrupt.
Rapping - The rapping is what I liked the most on this track. Good flow and good voice too. Your voice kinda remind me of Cappadonna. I like the rhyming patterns too.