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Old 02-15-2014, 08:15 PM   #419
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Originally Posted by White N Dangerous View Post
wat up wu i feel like i lost my spit ....its kinda sad...i use to be so good now i can't even form a decent rap sentece... does this happen to alot of ppl or am i the rare type?
I know what you mean.
I had exactly the same thing....
I felt like I had almost given everything I had to offer at one point.
What used to be interestingly fun had become a tedious task.
What used to flow so seamlessly now crawled.

Sometimes you gotta walk through The Gauntlet
While understanding that there are forces at work
That we cannot combat through our own trying to do so.

It's more a realization that you are a student constantly learning
And it simply means (in my own instance at least) that you have reached a level
Where you are your own worst critic.
And most people never achieve the levels after that.
Which is in their own minds as well - but to them they still exist.

I guess I'm trying to say that your rhymes will reflect yourself
And so there will be high's & lows - good & bad - incredible & abysmal.


Writer's Block is a myth when you really think about it.
You are not a writer....nor am I - we are simply projecting & manifesting perceptions.
Therefor : why look at your own work as you would another person you call a Writer?
You see?

Also ask yourself just what are you comparing yourself now to?
Your older writings? Other Emcees verses? your personal favourite Artist?
It's interesting when you start to think about it.
I take it you didn't think this when you started?
As you eluded to.

I'm sorry to go on....I could talk about this for hours.

And I hope it doesn't come across as condescending.
Only having been through a similar situation I find this really interesting.

Plus....I'm high as fuck.


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Originally Posted by White N Dangerous View Post
Ive Entered Endeavors in the stormiest Weather
Wheter things will get Better i feel broken n Severed
Second Guessin my First Intention leaves me nervous n Stressin
A Person thats Certain but Questions if hes Learnin his Lesson
Great stuff

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Originally Posted by White N Dangerous View Post
Ive experienced in my life multiple periods of strife
It got to tha point of having to be fearless n fight
Trying to do right id set sail for more grief
And as my tale entails id fail horribly
Morally i was drained n mentally depleted
Been there n back again physically beaten

Pieces of my soul had to under go repair
As i grabbed hold n didnt let go of despair
Tore through the abyss n inched towards sanity
I found myself adrift pulled back down by gravity
Gradually making more hurtful decisions
Destined to fail well thats my personal opinion
Faces around me constantly scheming n plotting
As i take a look at my surroundings n see that im drowning
Doubting my own visions as they become distorted n twisted
Constantly negative than uplifted to over ambitious
Viscious cycle that id like to break if i had the chance
No longer wanting to waste the potential that i have
Yes!

Great work.
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