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Old 11-05-2005, 04:33 AM   #215
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as the rays of the sun shine bright on my face

i find it hard to concentrate

to many things disturbing me

maniacs try to murder me

but thats a norm in our society

i wonder ... do people still care?

are people still curious

what would it be like ...

without the violence and crime

the only thing you cant lose and find again ... time
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