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Old 04-17-2006, 01:06 AM   #35
Vernakular
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my advice-

start usin rhymes in couplets

if you rhyme uneven it sounds stupid

also, start trying to incorporate wittier shit in battles, expand with your rhymes, use rhyme schemes

example

cpld scythe in hand with diabolical -cruel- intentions
slayin the weak, inadvertainly killin- fools- in -other- dimensions

add some pattern, make it sound better
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