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Old 07-11-2005, 01:24 PM   #51
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Default Re: Happy B-Day CCabsinthe02 (RIP)

CCabsinthe02 posted this May 2004:

The Dark Tunnel

Anger pulses through the veins of the strange.
Compassion melts the reactions from the rats encaged.
Instead of living life, I chose to be mentally insane.
That way I've already lost everything, and nothing more can be taken away.

When you're a schizophrenic drug addict with panic attacks,
Girls tend to hesitate to call you, some even give your digits back.
But in the end, we are all going to amount to whatever we can adapt,
Only problem with living lacking morals, I don't know how to react to an attack.

When the darkness comes to swallow the evening till tomorrow,
I lose my euphoria, switch to feeling sorrow in this hollow empty bottle.
Try and see life through your own eyes, not giving in to the temptations around you.
Whenever someone strikes at my pride, I run but can't hide, so what else is there to do?

I close my eyes and feel the heat rise from the past tides that have washed by,
I'm emotional and want to cry, but all I feel is the pain that burns inside.
Without a guide I stride, through this hellish existence we call life,
Hoping I can outlive the suicide that tempts me with its knife.




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Originally Posted by Forummember oo2

i feel this shit, son. for real....

a lot of deep lines...

"That way I've already lost everything, and nothing more can be taken away"

there's nothin more dangerous than a man with nothin to lose, for real.

"Without a guide I stride, through this hellish existence we call life,
Hoping I can outlive the suicide that tempts me with its knife."

that's what i always say: "it's all shit."

the rhymes were good too, also the flow. nice piece. one love




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Originally Posted by winte

deep.... you're improving ya rhythm and flow too. subject matter is deep, especially feelin the last two verses. PEACE


Reply from CCabsinthe02:

I can't tell you both (oo2 and Winte) how much your feedback means to me. Not only is it coming from 2 of the dopest mcs on this site, but it is also inspiration that you give me to write more. I can't thank you enough for the time you took to read my verse, and the feedback that was given. Peace and Love.
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