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Old 01-11-2007, 10:36 AM   #6
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^^^true, but i want everbody to get what i'm saying clearly. i always put quotations around my words that have a double meaning so i don't have to just say what i mean about it, i can just put the quotes on it and then the person will stop an think about for a sec then get it. Like this line:

If yo peoples try to shake my hand, i'd leave'im "dead hangin"//

I put quotes around dead hangin becuase it has two meanings, i'd leave them dead hangin meaning i'd wouldn't shake their hand and i'd leave the hangin. And the second meaning, i'd leave the dead hangin from a tree, dead hangin. I just want people to know what words have more than one meaning to it so i throw some quotations on it just so they don't miss it. Because if they miss one of the two meanings, the punch is worthless.


And the bolding is really just for showing schemes cuz some of them like this line get complex:
Keep fuckin around, u'll fight the force of real killers, we'll make u toothless
You could be onlife support, i'm still iller, quit fake'in ruthless


THis is really the only line that needs to be bold, cuz i want readers to see exactly how many words i'm rhyming in the bar (2 lines). THat's the reason for bolding.
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