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Old 05-12-2007, 11:05 PM   #24
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Originally Posted by Sleep Sinatra View Post
sum thought provoking written ish...feedback plz


a pecimist wit an attitude shitty /
sumtimez i feel like tha worlds tryna get me/
rimin gritty my mission is 2 rid tha city/
of pity punks who'd rather listen 2 diddy/
than a real nigga old skool like tha 50's/
i was born in tha golden age/
were battles were on stage instead overseas wit grenades/
it sickens me how that times forgotten/
now evrybody talkin ice,gear n body rockin/
bitches jockin niggas cuz they whips b flossin/
all im tryna do is get a lil name but often/
niggas squabbin over chains steadil mobbin/
I REALIZE WE CANT EVOLVE WIT OUT CONFLICT BUT 2 B HONEST WUT THA FUCK WE GON ACCOMPLISH?/
its nonsense but thas all that there's ever been/
cryin bout losses but how can we ever win?/


put alotta thought into this one feed back appreciated..
I read this verse. It was pretty cool. Very straight forward and to the point. Simple but effective. Sounds like you were using the pen to release some genuine thoughts and frustrations. Good stuff.
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