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    took a long drive up to San Francisco last week with my girl and during the most boring and grueling parts of the 11+ hours of driving i found myself freestyling which is something I've done only occasionally and while blazing with friends but never with my girl.....she encouraged me alot though and i unlocked a flood of rhymes

    was just writing about it now and somehow allowed it to metamorphose into poem prose, here it is:


    I really unlocked and let burst out a whole new part of me on this trip...

    A poetic, verbally dexterous side that I often hide
    and keep inside not realizing it's alive,
    needing to come out and breathe,
    roll up his sleeves and craft arts & crafts,
    paragraphs, brain-opening battle-axes and seraphs
    Clear as glass, mental mass flow flood in flash,
    blast sun beams from my soul until they shine out my asshole

    I kept comparing freestyling to the act of surfing, though I've never been surfing before I imagine freestyling to a beat as surfing the rhythmic waves...

    You surf on the beat,
    sliding, gliding beyond the grasp of your feet
    Balance is a treat, symmetrical tweaks
    keep you going, water flowing
    and you must stay in tune with it
    Once you think about the process, you fall
    words as objects, you're all
    tied up in logic, conscious crawl
    the scrawl inside your mental wall is all
    that's needed, your mind is freed if you succeeded
    unlock the gates to Jesus
    freedom of speeches, water of life breeches
    the dam of conscious rationality
    This is the True Reality

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    nice verses, tight rhymes.. interesting preface and commentary too

    post more-
    -peace silencer

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    peace Silencer, some dope rhymes...... i encourage you to drop more as well lol

    naw, but i feel what you said........ sometimes a woman can unlock deep inner thoughts and i feel rhyme patterns are a good way to let them be revealed

    peace

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    thanks fellas..


    gonna let some more shit pour out soon
    the freedom of adulthood is a curse and a boon

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    Once you think about the process, you fall
    words as objects, you're all
    tied up in logic, conscious crawl
    the scrawl inside your mental wall is all

    Liked how this flowed , the whole piece was defintely unique.



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    damn silencer shit was heat son

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    thanks alot people

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    yo that was dope

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    I knew it.

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