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    j_over
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    my beliefs are monotheistic, but non specific/
    and when im gone sadistic im unassisted/
    i cant resist it i spit explicit, and get lifted/
    gifted with a splif lit to leave ur lips split/
    you'll need some blistex, my artistic lingustics are so twisted/
    ill make you piss shit you missfits/
    your in the midst of it, im twistin it and shiftin it/
    the realistic shit.... im dissin it/
    your chicken shit, when im kickin it/
    im consistant with, prolific written scripts/
    as high as the statistics get, insisting it/


    this is part of a song i wrote a little over a year ago
    tell me what you think

    thank J Ova

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    ya name almost sounds liek J-Hova...no? lol

    well i liked it...kept the same rhymes but its cool, sounded nice man.......
    if u wanan hook up for a collab hit me up

    i liked it
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    Yeah it was nice

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    That's what i thought when i saw his title sounded like "Jehovah"!!!!!!
    Cool verse, don't be afraid-experiment with your words as you flow, they are many schools of thought!!!!!!!!!!!We expect more verses from you!!!

    Peace

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    j_over
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    thanks for the input
    I-Legit, i dont have a mic... so i dont know about the collab

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    her is the whole song....

    my beliefs are monotheistic, but non specific/
    and when im gone sadistic im unassisted/
    i cant resist it i spit explicit, and get lifted/
    gifted with a splif lit to leave ur lips split/
    you'll need some blistex, my artistic lingustics are so twisted/
    ill make you piss shit you missfits/
    your in the midst of it, im twistin it and shiftin it/
    the realistic shit.... im dissin it/
    your chicken shit, when im kickin it/
    im consistant with, prolific written scripts/
    as high as the statistics get, insisting it/
    mystic in the vision, balistics wizzin/
    swift kick incision, those wrists ur slitin glisten/
    in the sunlight, listen, get spun right/
    clockwise, vision like hawk eyes/
    i talk wise and drop guys with hot rymes/
    the plot finds the dot lines...... 2 X's/
    perplexs, my intalect is infectious/
    from here to teaxs, toast for breakfast,
    coast the lexus, the most impressive/
    sucsessive excessive rymes, to mess your minds/
    your assanine, ill smash your spine/
    clasic kind of fantastik design, masterd thru time/
    spent, inventing deffance agianst the devil/
    pedal to the metal, of corse i meddle with weapons and/ shit/
    seconds to spit the scene, emit a beam_____ hit tha spleen/
    of a distant fiend, i insist on green_____lazers/
    my mean face is a, falce front, a fake falicy/
    i make analogies of mc fatalities/
    they are not real, i got zeal for the game/
    feal my pain, steals the same/
    when it enters your heart, the sharp dart i impart verbaly/
    is murder he wrote, sturdy but broke financialy/
    im not angela lansburry/
    i plan to be gettin tha money tho, funny flow/
    from a newfoundlander, polute the air with slander/
    frome here to gander, comand the grander gramer/
    i am a.... man of my word, and i plan to be heard/
    in the echo of time, i let go of rymes/
    and let'em flow, frequent and fluently intuitively/
    new id be of the top, i often drop/
    tha syntax, and begin raps that spin cats like thin flat/
    records, the main aspect is the mass message/
    for all people, were all equal, its a small steeple/
    but u can find it, poluted rymes hit the student minded/
    recrute the blinded, and give em vision/
    your indicision has been revisioned/
    to make an obvious choice, in audio, voice and insrtamental blends/
    my mental decends thru pencils and pens/
    to leave impressions on pages and people/
    play this, the needle will be a bio hazzard/
    the vinal is plasterd with viral matter/
    as a matter of fact, atack your neverous system/
    with words of wisdom/
    concurrent convulsions, pulseing thru your synapse's/
    my rap colapsess your brain cells/
    with falling anvils, 7 stories dropin/
    stopin, 6 feet OVER, the streets wonder where i be probe'n/
    take me like ibuprofen, widely open/
    slyley scope me with trinoculars/
    as i inaculate the populous every time i talk a diss/
    or disembowel you, see me like the owl do/
    with lack of light, atack at night/
    im back despite the daly grind/
    play me find rewind and press it quick

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    Nice.........

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    thanks

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    I kinda like that skeme coz i use it my self most times....

    I agree wid spokes comment....more imagery would of helped....

    'stay awake'

    ORPHANS OF CUSH

    OUT SOON

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    Quote Originally Posted by j_over
    my beliefs are monotheistic, but non specific/
    and when im gone sadistic im unassisted/
    i cant resist it i spit explicit, and get lifted/
    gifted with a splif lit to leave ur lips split/
    you'll need some blistex, my artistic lingustics are so twisted/
    ill make you piss shit you missfits/

    ( ^^ Damn)

    your in the midst of it, im twistin it and shiftin it/
    the realistic shit.... im dissin it/
    your chicken shit, when im kickin it/
    im consistant with, prolific written scripts/
    as high as the statistics get, insisting it/


    this is part of a song i wrote a little over a year ago
    tell me what you think

    thank J Ova
    I liked it ... stay up




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


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    Quote Originally Posted by j_over
    her is the whole song....

    my beliefs are monotheistic, but non specific/
    and when im gone sadistic im unassisted/
    i cant resist it i spit explicit, and get lifted/
    gifted with a splif lit to leave ur lips split/
    you'll need some blistex, my artistic lingustics are so twisted/
    ill make you piss shit you missfits/
    your in the midst of it, im twistin it and shiftin it/
    the realistic shit.... im dissin it/
    your chicken shit, when im kickin it/
    im consistant with, prolific written scripts/
    as high as the statistics get, insisting it/
    mystic in the vision, balistics wizzin/
    swift kick incision, those wrists ur slitin glisten/
    in the sunlight, listen, get spun right/
    clockwise, vision like hawk eyes/
    i talk wise and drop guys with hot rymes/
    the plot finds the dot lines...... XX/
    perplexs, my intalect is infectious/
    from here to teaxs, toast for breakfast,
    coast the lexus, the most impressive/
    sucsessive excessive rymes, to mess your minds/
    your assanine, ill smash your spine/
    clasic kind of fantastik design, masterd thru time/
    spent, inventing deffance agianst the devil/
    pedal to the metal, of corse i meddle with weapons and/ shit/
    seconds to spit the scene, emit a beam_____ hit tha spleen/
    of a distant fiend, i insist on green_____lazers/
    my mean face is a, fake front, a falce falicy/
    i make analogies of mc fatalities/
    they are not real, i got zeal for the game/
    feal my pain, steals the same/
    when it enters your heart, the sharp dart i impart verbaly/
    is murder he wrote, sturdy but broke financialy/
    im not angela lansburry/
    i plan to be gettin tha money tho, funny flow/
    from a newfoundlander, polute the air with slander/
    frome here to gander, comand the grander gramer/
    i am a.... man of my word, and i plan to be heard/
    in the echo of time, i let go of rymes/
    and let'em flow, frequent and fluently intuitively/
    new id be of the top, i often drop/
    tha syntax, and begin raps that spin cats like thin flat/
    records, the main aspect is the mass message/
    for all people, were all equal, its a small steeple/
    but u can find it, poluted rymes hit the student minded/
    recrute the blinded, and give em vision/
    your indicision has been revisioned/
    to make an obvious choice, in audio, voice and insrtamental blends/
    my mental decends thru pencils and pens/
    to leave impressions on pages and people/
    play this, the needle will be a bio hazzard/
    the vinal is plasterd with viral matter/
    as a matter of fact, atack your neverous system/
    with words of wisdom/
    concurrent convulsions, pulseing thru your synapse's/
    my rap colapsess your brain cells/
    with falling anvils, 7 stories dropin/
    6 feet OVER, the streets wonder where i be probe'n/
    take me like ibuprofen, widely open/
    slyley scope me with trinoculars/
    i inaculate the populous every time i talk a diss/
    or disembowel you, see me like the owl do/
    with lack of light, im back despite the daly grind/
    play me find rewind and press it quick
    Okay, I posted before I saw the whole song. I always post first, then read ... not bad at all. Keep em comin'.

    Peace




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


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    j_over
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    thans agian for all the input, i appreciate it.

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