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Thread: Life (How if Unfolds) - Sheepish Lord of Chaos/Inspektah

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    Default Life (How if Unfolds) - Sheepish Lord of Chaos/Inspektah

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/81893214d0bdd129/


    Me on the first verse, Sheep on the second.



    i came through stories untold
    spread like the plague across the globe
    lighting the world up like a stove
    trynna hold on to reality loosing my grip
    hard to maintain when your minds playing tricks
    i slip slowly, into a never ending abysss
    where the cherished past
    is about to perish past
    memories that makes me laugh
    becomes a thing of the past
    my biggest obsession
    to get a million in my possesion
    leaving rappers burned like Michael Wesson
    my vocals is blessing, learn a lesson
    fucking with me, will only get u in depression
    for years i've been concealed
    time for me to be revealed
    taking giant leaps like Armstrong, holmes
    been through hell fire and brimstone
    to set my name in stone
    i beat you to a pulp non-fiction
    reservior lions with glorious gentleman
    advancing with the intention of death sentence


    Sup See this is how life unfolds
    this is how life unloads, recoils and reloads
    hate the plight on a daily
    hate the shit taken on a daily
    hate the spotless mind of the dumb on the daily
    hate those that diss all and love none...
    sup see this is how life unfolds
    this is how life unloads, recoils and reloads...


    Deniable audio salable rhyme caliber mathematical rapture
    given my birth guess my death is inevitable/
    so when I came to work the boss looked
    and said you jerk “YOUR FIRED”/
    felt as if Doc Brown came back from the future
    now obscure trips dipped low cash flow roasted toes/
    boost my confines now rewind the tape didn't steal a thing
    I think he was drunken by power for whatever means/
    gifted scheme dream up revenge similar to the sith
    by the gifts I can send your way wouldn't be anything McVay/
    skim the gall from the game their gauge is effective as the cup next to me
    you can't intimidate me, your fickle as a pickle that hasn't been picked yet/
    debt paid full dues skew any views now we got problems
    relations went all wrong getting played live full effect
    is like a gun pointed at cha and pissing wet drenched in sweat/
    didn't know what to think next is how I felt
    when my rent got canceled, my job dissed me and the bitch didn't even bother to kiss me/
    so I drifted into space, like a wasted trash case facing the wall nearest to the door
    thinking why brawl, when I can work my ass off if I could actually find something/
    hated pumping heat when the gas wasn't even on the cheap
    guess my pockets dropped like the roof dropped on Dorthy/
    port me like a PS2 Game file, guess now I am wild
    as a Tasmanian devil reveal effortlessly dreading any outcome
    guess we shall see on the next episode of how life unloads/

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    both need to get a good mic

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    well, other than that can you give me something like what i can improve with my flow.

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    Was your dinner burning in the oven?

    Slow the fuck down.

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    this is awful. i couldn't even listen past the first 15 seconds. take your time, get a better beat, learn to record, learn to mix a little bit and post one when you KNOW it sounds good. the lyrics i read are simplistic, but not terrible if you learn to spit proper.

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    Since you're starting off. use slower beats..and I wouldnt be worried about making actual songs, I would just spit on some beats so you can develop a flow.
    singodsuperior.com

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    well i got a good mic might be my laptops sound card sux asssssssssssssssss

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    this was horrible

    THE REAL PCP

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    rhyming to fast , mix isnt good, you need to level the mics out , when you try to make a song you need structure. its your 1st time learn from it. play it and if dont sound good than do it over until you feel its better

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