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    protoplasm, the phrenology of diuretics of my hippocampi within the mind of my brain matter/the magnetical musings of a master/Calculate the mathematics of Allah's world an abacus/the ingenious wisdom within that of my lyricism ;which in turn give fuel to my writings/reminisce of lessons from the verbatim of King Solomon/Palaeolithic objects of that period embellished within an leather covered papyrus on the pop-up/titular existentialist a remarkable lyricist whose gifted/with 3rd eye visions of Genesis/ transcending the remnants of Assyrian descendants......

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    Nabonidus predecessor, Nabopolassar’s successor
    Nebuchadnezzer, rebellion expeller in Ketuvim lectures
    Babylonian law, what was the chapter on seduction?
    Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth, limb for limb was the punishment
    A hundred yin for a hundred sins, That about covers it, doesn’t it?
    Fighting two zeros behind me like James Julian Southerland
    The coming winds in the tundra mist hides the enigma in front of it
    The corruption and plundering and the trouble that comes with it
    Oil is poison, sons and daughters in the morgue for it
    Mom drops the cordless, father standing on the porch tortured,
    My skull is a submarine hall
    Bathyscaphe through the Cambrian’s fauna on the deep sea floor
    Dr. Hillyer, David, Weena and George
    Watch in fast forward the horrors that form as man begins to wage war
    Sargon, Sumer, and then even before
    Pre-historians even thought that they ought to record
    Mid-Atlantic Ridge smoldering, Rodinia in molten seas
    Before Pangaea drifted and before the oceans freeze
    In my dreams, I’m yelling it, on beats I’m telling it
    On streets I’m selling it, strong speech imperative,
    For the words I derive, I should get the Pulitzer Prize
    PEN/Voelcker is fine, PEN/Faulkner’s declined
    I’ll get White Lion class 5, just give me some time
    Harold McGraw if I strive, Otto Hahn if I die
    Ansari X if it flies, Polar if I can get it to rhyme
    Jean Nicod Prize if I manage to open their minds
    Went south west in a straight line, Trent Texas from Lake Lime
    Because a message I was blessed with suggested I make time
    I got there a little early, the sight was other worldly
    The sky was filled with hues of blues and burgundy, 30
    My contact looked down, every light beam was searching
    The ground beneath was scorching but I wasn’t hurting
    I’ve got nothing to prove, nothing to lose, nothing to do
    Except to, lead you to a sky more blue
    We are clearly designed by the thoughts of a predefined fate
    The Theory of Mind, and the walk of a primate
    The Scarecrow’s Brain, the foresight and foreshadow of change
    Not nearly as important as the forbearing from which it came
    From thrashin and bashin’ to tracking’ and stabbin’
    From lackin’ to stackin’, from grabbin’ to rations
    From factions to cabinets, from draftin’ to askin’
    To sacking resources clean from every land we plant our flag in
    Heavy is the burden of the world that we carry
    “Are we up to the task?” is the Cosmonauts Query
    I scream out “YES!” But up there nobody hears me
    Too many bombs going off to transmit the message clearly
    Chainsaws in the forest, fleets of barges heaped with trash
    Concrete streets under my feet instead of Reed Sweetgrass
    Innocent are the thoughts that a youthful mind brings
    Before he is taught by the blind as the blindful eye leads
    Killing ourselves as our makers watch from Luna craters
    They’ll be our enslavers if we ever lose their favor
    “That is not dead which can eternally lie
    And with strange eons even death may die”
    The Pearls of Time by Gerald Klein, collective works of James Hynes
    Will McCarthy and John Varley in my mind
    The ground was damp, the air was warm
    In the jungle I sit. In the jungle I mourn
    My shirt ripped by thorns, body tired and worn
    Bruised, bloody, and burned, still i plot my return.....

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    the fasicination of my lyrical representation eradicate the synagogue of satan/
    which i plan to dismantle/
    7 chakras connected with dan tien i channel/
    envisioning the system harboring my wisdom, where i plan to kill the jugular vein with a bang/
    Me versus you, good vs evil, the yin and the yang/
    the professor eneritus of curriculm in the booth/
    an enlightened teacher who shared his insights in order to help sentient beings end there suffering with the four noble truths/
    in accordance with clairvoyance with the laws of karma/
    by realizing the true nature of phenomena & thereby escaping the cycle involutionary rebirths called samsara/
    3 jewels to take refuge: Buddha, Sangha, and the Dharma/
    the evolution in the change of demographics/
    beautiful music in the form of innate madness in time only worsens/
    comprised approximately 3/4ths of water on the earth surface/
    The Sun draws water up into the Earth rotation in a fine mist increasing with different currents of the atmosphere until she becomes heavier than gravitation/
    the lecture told in the Gobi desert told to an nation surrounded by the Yellow and the Yangtze River, the aid of Carbon-14 detection and dating and radiation, carpediem,in shape of 10,000 years in the time of civilization/
    Divine numerology examine the phrenology/the debauchery unearthed relics in the form of pottery/
    the 5 bonds, 5 relationship, filial piety/
    rhymes elementally compose of hot asphalt herald maintenance/
    in a vibe that comes off as pious, yet many find cantankerous/
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    spit sick shit like i got diarrhea of the mouth/ give you the news like North east west and south
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    the space-time continuum of physics ignores the realm of the mind/
    but consciousness is unconfined--by that of space and time/
    and represents a higher organizing principle---a 5th dimension, that transcends the speed of lights emission/
    light is more than just magnify radiant energy; for some its mind admittance/
    the power of truth & right discernment giving birth a higher echelon of vision/
    Right Knowledge cant get to Right Understanding so henceforth the term light is therefore synonymous with Wisdom

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    Examine the spiritualistic wisdom within my writtens/
    the theory of Utnafishtim trace bak to the first human beings of the Adamite peo-ple, whose sons were of the 3 elohs/ the density of polarization of something scared within the nature of ionzation/
    deepening my 7 chakras thru strenous mental calisthenics and meditation/
    3 monotheistic religions, separate within there belief system, yet acknowledging Satans' assiduous existence/ the mark of the beast, all documented in the Bible with one sentence/
    Chemtrails in the air, Trilateral Commission, The Illuminati isnt no more than a pseudoynm of a fraternity rooted Satanism-Luciferianism, the love for the pentagram, the lust for the Baphomet---its all debauchery/2010 a new year exist with new technology/
    these are words from the wise, the eloheim el kuluwn, the pleidians and the annunaki/ research, analyze and elevate and awaken and yourself will be define/
    Question why do people point up when mentioning heaven & down when discussing hell, howver never associating it with the mind of a prefernce as to how we feel/Cocked Ace-duce is my navy fedora reading the Torah, spiritually minded told to READ like verse 91:6 of the Surah concerning the story of the Prophet Muhammad and the Cherubim Jibriel

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    You've got the knowledge i can see bro but tbh all that is too much to take in lol, in the complexity of your rhymes.

    Idk if your planning on transferring this onto the mic but if you do take breath control and flow into consideration in your lyrics

    peace

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    Quote Originally Posted by Undiluted Karma View Post
    You've got the knowledge i can see bro but tbh all that is too much to take in lol, in the complexity of your rhymes.

    Idk if your planning on transferring this onto the mic but if you do take breath control and flow into consideration in your lyrics

    peace
    agreed, word cuz its different when ya just writing verses actually rapping sometimes you write it and then you rhyme the cadence of the bars you wrote might sound different when said

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    ^i think i remember somebody posting similar to what i just did before mybe it was you but thats where i got the comment from. i never really thought of it before but its quite interesting

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    thanks

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    Neurologist paleoantrhopologist study my handwriting on the papyrus/ 3rd eye open, spiritually linguistic metaphysicst of that of an Islamic Taoist/ the missing link between Christianity and Judaism/can be found in the beliefs and history of the Gnostic/ My dan tien, wing of Jibraail the seraphim, the 4 supports of heaven and.....my 7 seven chakras/ symbolically synonymously with the lotus flower

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    ^I see you have adapted and diluted your style a bit which is good.

    Neurologist paleoantrhopologist study my handwriting on the papyrus/ 3rd eye open, spiritually linguistic metaphysicst of that of an Islamic Taoist/

    ^Nice

    the missing link between Christianity and Judaism/can be found in the beliefs and history of the Gnostic/ My dan tien, wing of Jibraail the seraphim, the 4 supports of heaven and.....my 7 seven chakras/ symbolically synonymously with the lotus flower

    ^not so much feeling this bit your style can kind of wonder off into a documentary type style which personally im not feeling, and its a bit too heavy and contrived for my tastes. I can see where your going with the spiritual influence and I see the likes of LCOB have influenced you, but if you check their lyrics in more depth you will find their style gets the message across but isnt too 'heavy' and unrappable

    peace nice work

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