Straight blazing arrows
poison blade shaft is narrow
cause fragmentations like military grenades,
catch your boy at the promenade getting played like chump
Irradiate emcees like I just took a toxic dump
Similar metaphors enchant whores draw crowds
got a chance to shine plus the mics loud,
lyrically well endowed enough to do the beat proud,
buzzed, flowing like the water off the kick and snare,
its like riding a wave at the top of the crescent,
while below crab emcees beg for mercy like peasants,
ive reached the pinnacle of superiorty,
taught fools not to misbehave
and disrespect my authority.
Last bit of the first verse i was fucking around
I guess Butter Knives is still upsetting you
dont know why but you remind me of slug
not bad, i think you should stretch your lines
peep my thread
i was reciting this and it i dont know why but it has a holocaust feel to it esp. the last 3 bars
Originally Posted by Undiluted Karma
Thanks, I need to start writing (or typing) again.
I just tried to but it petered off lol.
I sometimes get these dope rhymes in my head then forget them lol, applies to most people I bet lol.
same here be having alot of ill one liners...and i trail off