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    Default Some shit i've been writtin.

    its the rap burgler/and i've come for ur jewlerry
    the track murder and i'm getting it done like usually
    set the earth on fire/like a satan take over
    striking mafuckas like the empire/u get run over like range rover
    MC make over/i raise the stakes/make you face the grave
    i'm nasty like nas an ace when i face the base
    cool and calm like a buddhist in the blizzard
    pulling rhymes out of ass like i'm some sort of wizard
    with more game than arcade/univeral came star made
    run like a horse but you can't sea-buistic
    lyrically aid infected and ever since been spitting with a sickness
    shine like christmas/more words that pictures
    when you wanna feature its like going to war
    cuz on the fucking battlefeild i'm winning for sure
    you cudn't score/if you were a fiend with a coke line
    fuck taking toke/lay on my death bed last days smoking rhymes

    with the mic in my arm/my senses react
    dismissing all the words that my pencil attached
    to the lined paper/rhyme greater/the dime creater
    sending messages to my cerebral cortex
    each time i'm killed i come back more blessed
    manic running out of control mind caught in a vortex
    walking thru the jungle/stay silent you move then you crumble
    when my lyrics shooot you tumble
    slowly like a hourglass/competiton i devour fast
    making moves like Iron Mic/
    close his eyelids to make sure he dying right
    with the gun in hand/i'm equivelent to son of sam
    life's just a one big struggle fam
    create RAW shit like Vince McMahon
    making muthafuckings scream WHUTTT! like Reggie Noble
    your shit concrete local while mine reach global.

    when it comes to the money drive
    i got bags like i'm sleep deprived
    my words i rhyme exquiste
    on some INS shit/
    but my hearts colder than two winters
    girls start to scream and i ain't move fingers
    strike nerves/what purpose does a life serves
    u a bitch that lives by ur wifes word
    my rhymes make you bite dirt/ruin your nice shirt
    this is ur fall like lighting that strike birds
    the microphone natural/facts actual
    my name spread international
    make more hits than Tysons glove
    hard as steel as i be rhymin tuff
    got game like i was created by Spike Lee
    when i'm on the stage i never let the mic breathe
    blowing competiton away like a tight breeze
    with the pen in my palm/i bomb like naplam
    never stay calm/cuz my verbal strays halm....
    rappers gettin dropped like chicken egges
    as i take flight and blaze farms

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    okay okay i like where u was going with this shit is tight have potential

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    which lines did you like and shit?

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    its the rap burgler/and i've come for ur jewlerry
    the track murder and i'm getting it done like usually
    set the earth on fire/like a satan take over
    striking mafuckas like the empire/u get run over like range rover
    MC make over/i raise the stakes/make you face the grave
    i'm nasty like nas an ace when i face the base
    cool and calm like a buddhist in the blizzard
    well cuz you caught me in the openning lines and thats how you grab e'm or you grab e'm by ya delivery

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    peaceeee man.

    Thanks for the feeedback, i just can't keep on writing shit, i have writing zones where i just write shit. A good rapper can come up with dope shit at any time.

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