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    Default first time rhyme spittah, peep this

    As the title says, first time I've bothered to write lyrics. Been messin around with producing for a minute so thought I'd give the pen game a go. Nothing crazy bout 10 mins worth of work.
    Let me know what you think though.

    aye yo, im a first time rhyme spitter/
    but my rhymes sicker/
    bars like i like my booze, bitter/
    5 mic award gripper/
    once started, never a quitter/
    infinite rhymes emerge from my dome/
    catchin wreck like when I clap on the chrome/
    shits nickle plated son, my hollow points make jacks run/
    sounding like "omars commin" dun, they straight cowards when I'm seen with a gun/
    born and raised in Adelaide, the city of churches/
    known for smoking bud, missin bodies and murderers,
    "thats why you haven't head of us!"/
    rhyme style like a bomb thats about to combust/
    no sketchy shit here, im the on you can trust/
    always can be relied on to get my rhyme on/
    venoms darts spat like a deadly python/
    Last edited by Chambers; 02-06-2011 at 08:35 AM. Reason: typos

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