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    No one too good lol. idk if im good or not

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    I'll battle
    MC Definition nuff said

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    im also down to battle.

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    set it up liquidswordchamber36

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    ill bust your fucking melon
    whein im rappin i cant help but start yellin
    i smoke poppers
    while doing backflips over helicopters
    i sip on disiel tea with green lobsters in flying saucers
    i stay hidden like monsters
    whther i be under ya bed
    or beneath the stairs
    i spit on ya forehead and rip out ya penial hairs
    no one really cares
    id one punch knockout bears
    i take journeys on a magic carpet
    why are the chicken wings growing inside my armpit?
    my favourite brekfast meal is ham pancakes
    you offered me a ciggarete i say no thanks!!
    but i appreciate the offer
    to be perfectley honest id rather not be a constant cougher
    mattlocka rhymes so weaak
    please dont ever try and speak
    i personally reccomend you get your brain excamined
    i rip out your spinnal cord barehanded
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    Hi Yo
    Battle me you'll never win
    I spit parargraph hotter then flames of lava
    Architect would'nt bring the drama
    Because my mind rage telekniatic energy
    Cut you down with lightsabers, for trying to battle me lyriclly
    You couldn't handle this I throw bloody knives
    Knocked him down knowledgeable rhymes
    Watch this missle inject and explode
    Deflect bullets witth a forcefiled green todd
    Hiject helicopter blades and cut you with them
    I see you peeping behind curtains
    Because you scarred of this ass waping for sertain
    Get punch with glasses on you is light as a feather
    When I kick you off a escalator
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    i stomp on the skull of you innocent infant
    with rugged hockey equipment
    im a runaway juvenile delinquint
    mouth foamin regergated lubricant
    i remove the tissue from your ligament
    and bang the fuck outta it like a drum instrument
    inject your bloodstream with a horrifying stimulant
    im considered the most annoying
    hells open devils employing
    step out the shade
    slice you with my hattori hanzo blade
    slippin grade
    from skippin to smoke & blaze
    its not a faze
    my mind is locked in a mental maze
    unholy wicked wayz
    flaming rhymes leave your ears looking like a blunted ashtray

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    Hi yo
    Bust companion see the size of my fist
    Smack ya teeth out based on concetrate list
    Throw cloak on rewind never Averger
    Fuck this boy get cut out like coconut
    Ice strom freeze you habbiting bike nut
    Dangerous instrument get stab with a fork
    This gun divides sick fuck in half
    Working swords mation picture rapes interior weather channel
    Unseen paper telepation bars damn take a bath
    I'm bigger brown art of war wesley snipes path
    Statelites system light beam the Earth
    Roation dirt you a deadman dick kisser
    My hands colder because Im mundering you

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    haunted by death sleepers
    fuck school and teachers
    your blood prints lead back to my sneakers
    smoked chronic below the bleechers
    approached by cheeba creepers
    kidnapped by cryptid creatures
    raised by nocturnal grym reepers
    avoding all goverment heat seekers
    givein your old geziers
    physcical seizures
    mystical bleeders
    at the sight of my freightful facial features
    meat eaters
    tyrasourous rex with meat cleavers
    insert them into non belivers
    toss they dead body into the neighbors freezers
    repersent the w for wu & weezer
    get your eyes poked out by my toothpick tweezer
    they are 2 kinds of luck
    how much you wanna bet yours is bad
    you stupid fuck
    all sentences end with periods
    all my rhymes end mysterious
    i leave your brains and horrible lyrical slangs
    along with other remains
    in the gravel
    another victorius rap battle
    vulcan death pinch ya adams apple
    spit sulfuric acid on ya tunge
    rip out and smoke your resido lung

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    Hi Yo
    Golden Barz better then commerical rapes
    Whole forettess catch laser beam system capes
    When I attack leave you flat on the suferes
    In superspeed rip neck off in a distance
    Catch darts to the mug,Smash you like a bug
    Rain power shit, Bet him with wipes with pieces off glass glue to it
    Select weapon matix menu,Get slit into two
    Swing swords blade protool,Stop playing with like a fool
    Do drive byes with machine gun,Hit you with Thor hammer into the sun
    Burn you down to ashes,Cain saw your inter organes
    Blast you with pyriamid,Advance thoughts then Profresser X
    Marvel at puch lines,Cave your chest in slice ya ears off
    You get puch in allys,For talk weak shit in battles

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    aight 3 rounds im good. Lets get some votes on the winner?

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    liquidswordchamber36

    Verse 1



    Summary: I thought the shit was hysterical, the flow was on some laid back hyped shit like Craig Mack status, I was rolling with the imagery.

    I didn't feel like the threat was serious though, you weren't personal with the opponent.


    i spit on ya forehead and rip out ya penial hairs
    no one really cares
    you offered me a ciggarete i say no thanks!!
    but i appreciate the offer
    Maybe a little more vicious with the humor next time, try to use your creative imagery in a more violent matter, stab into the nigga.




    Verse 2


    i stomp on the skull of you innocent infant
    with rugged hockey equipment
    im a runaway juvenile delinquint
    mouth foamin regergated lubricant
    i remove the tissue from your ligament
    and bang the fuck outta it like a drum instrument
    .That's what the fuck I'm talking about, you started this verse out tough. Good Imagery and decent multiple word play.

    from skippin to smoke & blaze
    its not a faze
    my mind is locked in a mental maze
    unholy wicked wayz


    Than you started to die out around here, and managed to pick up back to your target in the end. Still a complete solid verse, humorous and vivid.



    Verse 3



    I like the rhyme scheme


    repersent the w for wu & weezer
    get your eyes poked out by my toothpick tweezer


    Shit is dope, definitely felt the multi's in this verse.

    they are 2 kinds of luck
    how much you wanna bet yours is bad
    you stupid fuck
    all sentences end with periods
    all my rhymes end mysterious


    These lines had me laughing.

    i leave your brains and horrible lyrical slangs
    along with other remains
    in the gravel
    another victorius rap battle
    vulcan death pinch ya adams apple
    spit sulfuric acid on ya tunge
    rip out and smoke your resido lung
    Than you went to the throat for the finisher. The third verse was the stand out!



    Matlock's summary, and my pick tomorrow.


    Big Pimpin Power Ranger Slappin Hoes Since 1986

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    Quote Originally Posted by TeknicelStylez View Post

    Matlock's summary, and my pick tomorrow.
    My bad cool
    Last edited by Snow chainz; 11-08-2011 at 12:59 PM.

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    Thanks for the feedback and im looking forward to Matlock's summary along with the winner!

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    That it he taking long with the vote I won.

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