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    Default New Track "Oh My".

    what's up ya'll.
    just wanted to get some feedback on this track of mine.
    its not a long track, just one verse. my production as well.
    let me know what you think
    any feed is appreciated.

    http://soundcloud.com/spokenn/spokenn-oh-my-produced-by

    The Lyrics:
    Who else can make your mind twist, like a sci fi flick
    at the same time, rhyme to ignite minds with
    like flicks of a lighter on a dynamite stick
    while it sits on your head, girl, you ride or die chick
    you idolize kids, put the crown on the wrong king
    and in return, you're in the ground with your offspring
    talk things most cats would hesitate to speak on
    a short lived career, what makes you think you be long?
    should i keep on? or ease off slow
    You ain't dope, you say quotes with a detox flow
    a comparisons a waste, cause to me, ya'll jokes
    Seen so many ups and downs, the see saw broke
    A life with many turns, i'm blind, forget the verse
    have to deal with the shit, i don't think i Ever earned
    yet i'm cursed with a gift, as if this kinda skill
    will reimburse what i lived, already worse than it is
    the purpose to spit, these words aren't working a bit
    Killing time, another crime that i'm sure to commit
    Days wasted, my face displays the grimace
    A 24 hour race, with no Way to finish
    A pursuit for happiness, dreams that are fading with it
    must be an unsafe religion, not much faith up in it
    i paid a visit to the man i once used to be
    noticed things he would say are untrue to me
    To some, This life is a failure
    but I'm here to tell ya, a bright Idea to help ya
    Suffer through the same, with no Guidance at all
    or remain small minded like microcephilia
    - A couple songs to rebuttal all crews off
    The ones who cant move on, get Cut like a coupon
    Forget me? I run you all, Rudolph
    i'ma Have to ring your bells faster than the Montreal screw-job
    - The shit you're telling me now is elementary
    eventually, i'll settle you down, my mental therapy
    is said to be incredibly wild, don't ever mention me
    The Deputy with Seventy rounds, on methamphetamines
    I - prescribe doses of poems, but i wrote 'em
    Fight spokenn, have your life stolen, bi-polar rhyme thrower
    Time closer, I am the one
    You're the victim that your well behaved society is hiding me from
    Saliva can harm ur type o' shield
    scar the giant still
    my dream catcher is made of spider silk
    Time to build a foundation for this catastrophic man
    non patriotic chants, i'm made of honor...Damn
    it's getting dark as fuck in this Room i'm locked in
    inconsiderates and illiterates need to View my Doctrine
    if not...decapitating if they Refuse my Option
    oh my...look at who the clear blue skies dropped in
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    I dug this man, some good lyrics delivered strongly on nicely layered beat props
    My Musik @
    www.myspace.com/mousetheprodigy
    grace&piece

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    thanks man. appreciate the fb.

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