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    Default Triple feature: "THE SHINING", "THE MAVEN", and "DON'T GO AGAINST THE GRAIN"

    THE SHINING

    my pen creates phrases of praise that will never fade
    I decorate pages like the ancient blades that patiently abraded Chinese jade
    I'll take a clay spade and shape the frame of Satan's grave
    for the Savior exclaimed that they who betray His sacred name forsake a great crusade
    the war I fight inside is soulful and holy
    I write to show hope and enlighten, though cold is the plight of the poor and lowly
    I was blind before, but now my chorus of glorious noise soars boldly
    with restored sight I recite poems of the victorious joy that pours from the Lord solely
    He can erase sadness and fill lives with gladness
    He gives me strength as my eyes span the length of this world of madness
    some nights the stars hide in dark skies like Light in the lies of apartheid
    but the Messiah's life was archived on the far side of time then reprised as my heart's guide



    THE MAVEN

    arrows depart the archer's bow like martyred crows
    the dark-hearted marcher artfully parsed his parchment to mark his foes
    a chosen poet that prefers flowed verses as opposed to prose
    slowly embarks on global searches whose start and purpose no one knows
    he preys on evil pagans who wage aimless wars and blaspheme
    praises of a blameless sage neatly conveyed on sacred pages more than passim
    the rhyme jeweler, each line clean so even narrow-dome fools see the gleam
    keeps appeasement cream then flees like agreements between Pharaoh the ruler and Ibrahim
    a language maven, he evades vague statements and strays from faces graven
    prays in patient cadence while plagues of raging ravens raid then raze their safe havens
    he'll place dismay and anguish on enemies like David's slayed assailants
    and stay in the Way of the Savior to prevail against deadly agents of Satan's surveillance



    DON'T GO AGAINST THE GRAIN

    I harvest raps then carve the caps of cats that go against the grain like a thresher
    craft mathematically exact abstract graphs that slash dimensional planes like M.C. Escher
    a wealth of clever legerdemain invades brains and maintains insane pressure
    self-ordained to reign forever so there ain't no lane for no lame to be proclaimed successor
    see, son rose on the third day and on the seventh I rested
    a poet whose prose and wordplay is Heaven-sent and will never be bested
    my skills still haven't crested yet my benevolence is ever requested
    with His blessed presence I'm well invested hence my development will never be arrested

    GOLDEN ARMS REDEMPTION



    'Forked tongue make painful kisses...........and fam, when you talk, then the angels listen.'

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    nice work WaP

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    [QUOTE=War and Peace;2060574]THE SHINING

    my pen creates phrases of praise that will never fade
    I decorate pages like the ancient blades that patiently abraded Chinese jade
    I'll take a clay spade and shape the frame of Satan's grave
    for the Savior exclaimed that they who betray His sacred name forsake a great crusade
    the war I fight inside is soulful and holy
    I write to show hope and enlighten, though cold is the plight of the poor and lowly




    THE MAVEN

    arrows depart the archer's bow like martyred crows
    the dark-hearted marcher artfully parsed his parchment to mark his foes
    a chosen poet that prefers flowed verses as opposed to prose
    slowly embarks on global searches whose start and purpose no one knows
    he preys on evil pagans who wage aimless wars and blaspheme
    praises of a blameless sage neatly conveyed on sacred pages more than passim



    you killling em son your killing em!



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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