i log on the site and see the thoughts of some dykes
the loss and the plights of geeks who're lost in the light
no improvement, nothing special, just some jaws in the vice
no one's spectacular in the morning or awesome at night
i can't find PSY's verse when peeps've cloned his thread set
you freaking jokes who need your weed and coke to bless text
now say "good bye" when you leave and post your best thread
you need to grow, a head check; heed the ghosts of dead vets
believe the glowing death threats of lonely martyrs on the cross
i'm only dying and trying to make solely artists out of yawl
no sick emcees, no crews, no thoughts just foolish handles and
you just suck, there's no criticism for those noobish ramblings
just shut the fuck up, stop writing, it's no use you're not tight
drop the gimmicks, lose the pen and pad, really, just stop life
and i'ma stop cause yawl hardly spit gems...
and i'm just plain rude... i'm sorry big ben...
...but while all this "everybody gets a thread" shit is positive, it's wack and keeps you kids stuck in your ruts of dropping useless verses with one or two good phrases... take the time periods to piece those phrases together and make an erstwhile piece of work thats worth posting... when you release something onto the net, a page or soundwaves, whatever it is, even if your crumble it up and throw it away, it becomes public property... most've yawl are represented as talentless poseur dorks even though you're writing for fun... you are still writing poetry or rap, which is a sacred art, so take the time to perfect it... the main difference between the bulk of this forum and real writers is that yawl write to be heard and complimented when 'real' writers write for themselves but know that they're really writing to a much larger audience, the world... which they are apart of...