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    Default Bronze & Whers - Continuum Part.3

    We Have Returned With Words Disturbed For The Concerned
    Wisdom Has Emerged Rhythm Submerged Messages Unheard
    Knowlegde Swerved And Turned Profound To Unfound & Absurd
    Senseless Seditives Injected Invented Jealous Fellas Unlearned
    Speeches Slurred Vision Blurred Tryna Make Sense Of This World
    For Mine Has Burned Like My Left Wing But I Remain Undettered
    For The Sword Once Concealed Is Now Revealed Los Noches Steal
    Will Kill & Spill Your Grill Just Like A Clumsy Cook At B.B.Q. Meals
    Ill 4 Real I Weild The Quill With Light Yagami Skill Untill All Is Still....
    at will, we collide time zones and delegate with the quill
    whers sharpened the blade and carved motion still
    filed underfire, take cover and heed human desire,
    the cold north squire, raise my fist like a messiah
    push and surge, section 9 sarge with electrical charge
    scalar weapons pulse from handheld mechanizms
    grand high chiefs creating cataclysmic schizms
    borderline psychotic visions, watch while change up the system...
    Good Luck With That....Cos We Be Graded With Distinction
    For Leaving Vision Missing So Your Better Off Tryin To Listen
    To Silent Penmanship Wisdom From A Free Man Imprisoned
    For Forfilling What The Darkest Parts Of His Heart's Wishing
    And With Section Saito Sniper Precision I Leave Shit Missing
    Like Toilet Flushes Killing Enemy Emcees While We're Sitting
    When The Blade Of Darkness & The Bronze Hammer Collision
    Leaves Souls Unforgiven Lifted-Spirits Risen No Longer Living....
    .....undead poets with lyrics like harpoons throwin
    concave lense visualized the enclaves defenses,
    smashed the pretenses offensive language
    can bring you sever anguish, depends on what the aim is
    my aim is deadly accurate, targets are hunted by hungry wolves
    whers whips whirlwinds, cyclonic centres that pulls...
    We Attacking Cruel Old Teachers Like Rival Schools
    My Crew Like X-Men Decapitating These Sentinals
    Monumental Lyrical Although The Audio's Invisible
    Littered With Jewels As The Bars Become Minimal
    Awaking Of The Spiritual VS Witnessing A Miracle
    I Am This But Cease To Exist Like The Word Intrical....
    ....i force fields of men to yield, glance at the imperial
    wield warhammers when i enter to the field, empirical
    evidence shows who benevolent, Bronze the Majestic..
    And The War & Peace Apprentice We Rhyme Mesmeric
    With Savage Elegence Found Beneath The Sediments
    While I'm Dust The Basement Dwellaz Form Cerberus....
    ... the three headed monster, summersault blanka
    tsunami sri lanka, whirlwind elements that stomp ya
    My Face Somber Untill Your With The Living No Longer
    And Become A Meal Like Screaming Chosen Lobsters....
    Basement Dwellin henchmen, Section Nine mobsters....
    Blatant Yellin "Behead Them !!!!" Preventing Mine : Nonsense....

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    Will Kill & Spill Your Grill Just Like A Clumsy Cook At B.B.Q. Meals

    And With Section Saito Sniper Precision I Leave Shit Missing
    Like Toilet Flushes Killing Enemy Emcees While We're Sitting
    When The Blade Of Darkness & The Bronze Hammer Collision
    Leaves Souls Unforgiven Lifted-Spirits Risen No Longer Living....


    ... the three headed monster, summersault blanka
    tsunami sri lanka, whirlwind elements that stomp ya

    ^that came off dope, probly my fav lines right there

    the last part flowed better for me when yall wuz jus tradin cuz it seemed like whers dropped a few syllables out of each line and it complimented bronze shit much better than the first couple verses..transition wuz better.. for me anyway

    nice read, peace

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    scalar weapons pulse from handheld mechanizms
    grand high chiefs creating cataclysmic schizms
    borderline psychotic visions, watch while change up the system...
    Good Luck With That....Cos We Be Graded With Distinction
    For Leaving Vision Missing So Your Better Off Tryin To Listen
    To Silent Penmanship Wisdom From A Free Man Imprisoned
    For Fulfilling What The Darkest Parts Of His Heart's Wishing

    i got the image of two technicians plotting in a hidden lab. dope visuals here.


    We Attacking Cruel Old Teachers Like Rival Schools
    My Crew Like X-Men Decapitating These Sentinals
    Monumental Lyrical Although The Audio's Invisible
    Littered With Jewels As The Bars Become Minimal
    Awaking Of The Spiritual VS Witnessing A Miracle
    I Am This But Cease To Exist Like The Word Intrical....
    ....i force fields of men to yield, glance at the imperial
    wield warhammers when i enter to the field, empirical
    evidence shows who benevolent, Bronze the Majestic..
    And The War & Peace Apprentice We Rhyme Mesmeric
    With Savage Elegence Found Beneath The Sediments
    While I'm Dust The Basement Dwellaz Form Cerberus....
    ... the three headed monster, summersault blanka
    tsunami sri lanka, whirlwind elements that stomp ya

    i was really digging this back and forth, King pointed out the blanka/sri lanka combo before I could but it IS an awesome series of lines.

    once more the BDZ bless us with fire.
    weep for lost babylon,
    the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
    bordered by a sea of faults,
    fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
    screaming shots, police and chalk,
    wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...

    -.5Kut

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    I can remain speechless on this because it was that fucking gooooooood

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    thanks yall, it was a good series me and whers put together

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    very enjoyable read.

    would make a nice back an forth cut for sure.

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    sometimes I wanna see whers actually grip a mic and shows us what he got just saying whers u a beast son keep killing it and bronze you def brought cha A game son

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bronze Feet View Post
    We Have Returned With Words Disturbed For The Concerned
    Wisdom Has Emerged Rhythm Submerged Messages Unheard
    Knowlegde Swerved And Turned Profound To Unfound & Absurd
    Senseless Seditives Injected Invented Jealous Fellas Unlearned
    Speeches Slurred Vision Blurred Tryna Make Sense Of This World
    For Mine Has Burned Like My Left Wing But I Remain Undettered
    For The Sword Once Concealed Is Now Revealed Los Noches Steal
    Will Kill & Spill Your Grill Just Like A Clumsy Cook At B.B.Q. Meals
    Ill 4 Real I Weild The Quill With Light Yagami Skill Untill All Is Still....
    at will, we collide time zones and delegate with the quill
    whers sharpened the blade and carved motion still
    filed underfire, take cover and heed human desire,
    the cold north squire, raise my fist like a messiah
    push and surge, section 9 sarge with electrical charge
    scalar weapons pulse from handheld mechanizms
    grand high chiefs creating cataclysmic schizms
    borderline psychotic visions, watch while change up the system...
    Good Luck With That....Cos We Be Graded With Distinction
    For Leaving Vision Missing So Your Better Off Tryin To Listen
    To Silent Penmanship Wisdom From A Free Man Imprisoned
    For Forfilling What The Darkest Parts Of His Heart's Wishing
    And With Section Saito Sniper Precision I Leave Shit Missing
    Like Toilet Flushes Killing Enemy Emcees While We're Sitting
    When The Blade Of Darkness & The Bronze Hammer Collision
    Leaves Souls Unforgiven Lifted-Spirits Risen No Longer Living....
    .....undead poets with lyrics like harpoons throwin
    concave lense visualized the enclaves defenses,
    smashed the pretenses offensive language
    can bring you sever anguish, depends on what the aim is
    my aim is deadly accurate, targets are hunted by hungry wolves
    whers whips whirlwinds, cyclonic centres that pulls...
    We Attacking Cruel Old Teachers Like Rival Schools
    My Crew Like X-Men Decapitating These Sentinals
    Monumental Lyrical Although The Audio's Invisible
    Littered With Jewels As The Bars Become Minimal
    Awaking Of The Spiritual VS Witnessing A Miracle
    I Am This But Cease To Exist Like The Word Intrical....
    ....i force fields of men to yield, glance at the imperial
    wield warhammers when i enter to the field, empirical
    evidence shows who benevolent, Bronze the Majestic..
    And The War & Peace Apprentice We Rhyme Mesmeric
    With Savage Elegence Found Beneath The Sediments
    While I'm Dust The Basement Dwellaz Form Cerberus....
    ... the three headed monster, summersault blanka
    tsunami sri lanka, whirlwind elements that stomp ya
    My Face Somber Untill Your With The Living No Longer
    And Become A Meal Like Screaming Chosen Lobsters....
    Basement Dwellin henchmen, Section Nine mobsters....
    Blatant Yellin "Behead Them !!!!" Preventing Mine : Nonsense....

    damn somebody call the bomb squad!!!!!!



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