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    Fuck The Law. H.Notik's Avatar
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    Default a piece of creativity.

    zone in...


    tune out...


    life is life lets cross the F out.



    LIE



    chant and re-live...
    a serpents sacrafice, suicide
    soothin' eyes accepted, except when jesus cries
    let the meaning be a vessel, voyage, truthful credential...
    elevation: terrestriel - speech pattern volcanic
    seap into the ocean with glee, only to panic
    soaked...buthard as a rock armed with a'
    COCK'...Adoodle wake up voodoo for useful alarm clocks...
    bust it,
    matter of fact yo fuck it...
    rape the vision portrayed by a scavangers bucket
    lolly-gaggin misery, beneath the cities symphony
    'cling' goes the sound 'cling cling cling' all things considering,
    you got yourself a pretty penny worth of booze control the simmering.
    boiling...
    water flows, behold the sympathy
    wash away, wash away, wash away....

    wash away the pollen stains and breath... precious air
    this is mental organisms confused with pressure of no cares

    you scared?

    Caught up with the sky
    Shot at God.


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    Quote Originally Posted by H.Notik View Post

    LIE



    chant and re-live...
    a serpents sacrafice, suicide
    soothin' eyes accepted, except when jesus cries
    let the meaning be a vessel, voyage, truthful credential...
    elevation: terrestriel - speech pattern volcanic
    seap into the ocean with glee, only to panic
    soaked...


    bust it,
    matter of fact yo fuck it...
    rape the vision portrayed by a scavangers bucket
    lolly-gaggin misery, beneath the cities symphony

    you got yourself a pretty penny worth of booze control the simmering.
    boiling...
    water flows, behold the sympathy
    wash away, wash away, wash away....

    wash away the pollen stains and breath... precious air
    this is mental organisms confused with pressure of no cares

    you scared?
    i felt like i was listening in on you sketching a few verses to some beats you just picked up. I like how you threaded it together with the "water" theme.

    what were you listening to when you did this?

    peace
    weep for lost babylon,
    the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
    bordered by a sea of faults,
    fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
    screaming shots, police and chalk,
    wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...

    -.5Kut

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    read this a couple of times and got a good flow out of it. good written overall, some dope lines in there

    let the meaning be a vessel, voyage, truthful credential...
    elevation: terrestriel - speech pattern volcanic
    seap into the ocean with glee, only to panic

    ^these were dope

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    damn dope son short but sweet

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    Quote Originally Posted by H.Notik View Post
    zone in...


    tune out...


    life is life lets cross the F out.



    LIE



    chant and re-live...
    a serpents sacrafice, suicide
    soothin' eyes accepted, except when jesus cries
    let the meaning be a vessel, voyage, truthful credential...
    elevation: terrestriel - speech pattern volcanic
    seap into the ocean with glee, only to panic
    soaked...buthard as a rock armed with a'
    COCK'...Adoodle wake up voodoo for useful alarm clocks...
    bust it,
    matter of fact yo fuck it...
    rape the vision portrayed by a scavangers bucket
    lolly-gaggin misery, beneath the cities symphony
    'cling' goes the sound 'cling cling cling' all things considering,
    you got yourself a pretty penny worth of booze control the simmering.
    boiling...
    water flows, behold the sympathy
    wash away, wash away, wash away....

    wash away the pollen stains and breath... precious air
    this is mental organisms confused with pressure of no cares

    you scared?

    Damn this made me think iv'e never read something so short and unique took my mind through a trip much props!



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Feelin this bro, good shit.



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