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    verse one

    detected thoughts of provoked relations and allegations
    trapped in my own iniquity violence that lead to parole violations
    pathement pacing brain confusion 3 day temptation from Satan
    i didn't bow or prey me and my lady laid exchanging vows at the end of day
    know we broke-up her tears for fears tissue she soaked up
    a new partner she's with i held in pain i shouldv'e spoke up
    instead i stayed smoked up killing sober feelings
    heart wounds so deep it'll take a life-time of healing
    still at the party friends showed pity as ladies showed ass, and titty
    it was a friends house in the burbs' still my souls in the city
    with the ex that marked the spot too proud to ask for one more shot
    in dreams the hands of time turn back i wake up to a empty bottle of scotch
    anger at the thought of her at the bottom without me on top
    i have no use for these cherries and strawberries
    burning pictures of her i caught an arson charge in the cemetary
    wish i could delete the past her new man i want to beat that ass(no homo)
    but i must respect her feeling and somehow move on fast
    And for a while the remedy was a few drinks, strip-clubs, and a wallet full of cash
    then i drove day-dreaming of her and got into a fucking car-crash


    v2

    Just when i forgot about her she calls and i don't answer
    erase her texts without reading them
    two years later and i found out she birthed my son
    i was clothes shopping and her cousin told me the news
    I took a blood-test denying her claims before know i feel like a fool
    were still cool tried to get her back by enrolling in her school
    to only sleep with her friends not purposely either
    she confronted me in the cafe and i got ethered
    know she's bonning my connect on reefa
    i guess pay-back is a bitch like life is
    every other woman iv'e laid lack the tightness
    too broke to pay the prices it's impossible to find a queen who's righteous
    my son's older i spend time but to her it's not enough
    i got pissed because she's walking the streets without four fifth's of her goods covered up
    she just smiled as if my concern enlightened her day
    she asked me do you want to really make this work or do you want to get laid??

    v3

    actions spoke louder than words as our clothes fell to the floor
    heart racing as my old territory was re-explored
    just as she was climaxing from the action somebody rang the door-bell
    i tried to make her ignore it but she just got dressed complaining she broke a nail
    It was her old friend and to my suprise she let the dude in
    he commented on how fine she looked she just turned red and started blushing
    Mad as hell i grabbed my jacket saying i'll be on my way paying no mind she told me to have a good day
    Kicked it with an old neighbor across the street that used to live around the way
    He said are you guys a couple again? i told him no were just friends
    Not knowing this dude would go back and tell her everything i said
    she called and said to pick her up grabbed my son from out the bed
    he started kicking, and fighting i gave em his bear he relaxed
    crying where's mommy until i picked her up at her cousin mack's
    she kissed the baby laughing at me saying baby your crazy!
    asked me if i still love her i stumbled no then maybe
    then she said with another woman is where you belong
    i smelled fear coming from her and the fragrence was strong
    that night my son fell asleep we happily got it on
    then in the morning i woke to a note saying your good in bed but iv'e moved on
    Last edited by Mantra; 03-28-2011 at 10:24 AM.



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
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    Quote Originally Posted by J.T.S. View Post
    verse one

    detected thoughts of provoked relations and allegations
    trapped in my own iniquity violence that lead to parole violations
    pavement pacing brain confusion 3 day temptation from Satan
    i didn't bow or prey me and my lady laid exchanging vows at the end of day

    know we broke-up her tears for fears tissue she soaked up
    a new partner she's with i held in pain i shouldv'e spoke up
    instead i stayed smoked up killing sober feelings
    heart wounds so deep it'll take a life-time of healing
    still at the party friends showed pity as ladies showed ass, and titty
    it was a friends house in the burbs' still my souls in the city
    with the ex that marked the spot too proud to ask for one more shot
    in dreams the hands of time turn back i wake up to a empty bottle of scotch
    anger at the thought of her at the bottom without me on top
    i have no use for these cherries and strawberries
    burning pictures of her i caught an arson charge in the cemetary
    wish i could delete the past her new man i want to beat that ass(no homo)
    but i must respect her feeling and somehow move on fast
    And for a while the remedy was a few drinks, strip-clubs, and a wallet full of cash
    then i drove day-dreaming of her and got into a fucking car-crash


    damn J, I really felt your loss in this verse


    v2

    Just when i forgot about her she calls and i don't answer
    erase her texts without reading them
    two years later and i found out she birthed my son
    i was clothes shopping and her cousin told me the news
    I took a blood-test denying her claims before know i feel like a fool
    were still cool tried to get her back by enrolling in her school
    to only sleep with her friends not purposely either
    she confronted me in the cafe and i got ethered
    know she's bonning my connect on reefa
    i guess pay-back is a bitch like life is
    every other woman iv'e laid lack the tightness
    too broke to pay the prices it's impossible to find a queen who's righteous
    my son's older i spend time but to her it's not enough
    i got pissed because she's walking the streets without four fifth's of her goods covered up
    she just smiled as if my concern enlightened her day
    she asked me do you want to really make this work or do you want to get laid??

    haha! I've been here. too many exes claim their seed are mine and that test proved otherwise in my case.

    v3

    actions spoke louder than words as our clothes fell to the floor
    heart racing as my old territory was re-explored
    just as she was climaxing from the action somebody rang the door-bell
    i tried to make her ignore it but she just got dressed complaining she broke a nail
    It was her old friend and to my suprise she let the dude in
    he commented on how fine she looked she just turned red and started blushing
    Mad as hell i grabbed my jacket saying i'll be on my way paying no mind she told me to have a good day
    Kicked it with an old neighbor across the street that used to live around the way
    He said are you guys a couple again? i told him no were just friends
    Not knowing this dude would go back and tell her everything i said
    she called and said to pick her up grabbed my son from out the bed
    he started kicking, and fighting i gave em his bear he relaxed
    crying where's mommy until i picked her up at her cousin mack's
    she kissed the baby laughing at me saying baby your crazy!
    asked me if i still love her i stumbled no then maybe
    then she said with another woman is where you belong
    i smelled fear coming from her and the fragrence was strong
    that night my son fell asleep we happily got it on
    then in the morning i woke to a note saying your good in bed but iv'e moved on
    that was cold but I've had that happen to, sun.

    peace.
    weep for lost babylon,
    the bleeding god, the forgotten sheep slaughtered in a forest of evil fog
    bordered by a sea of faults,
    fleeing mobs turn to see the holocaust and become kings and queens of salt
    screaming shots, police and chalk,
    wingless fallen demons walking among us as people...

    -.5Kut

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    thanks guys peace and blessings.



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    on point man.. this shit had me sucked in, way to hold the topic down

    know we broke-up her tears for fears tissue she soaked up
    a new partner she's with i held in pain i shouldv'e spoke up
    instead i stayed smoked up killing sober feelings
    heart wounds so deep it'll take a life-time of healing

    I took a blood-test denying her claims before know i feel like a fool
    were still cool tried to get her back by enrolling in her school
    to only sleep with her friends not purposely either
    she confronted me in the cafe and i got ethered
    know she's bonning my connect on reefa
    i guess pay-back is a bitch like life is
    every other woman iv'e laid lack the tightness
    too broke to pay the prices it's impossible to find a queen who's righteous
    --sick

    the whole 3rd verse killed it j
    bitches like that i cant have nothin to do with anymore
    but what u gon do when u got seeds man? aint shakin her now
    quit beatin it up tho if u cant bury those old feeling man! haha
    dangerous grounds homie

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    thanks for the criticism bro it really means alot iv'e gotten over the whole ordeal just reflecting!



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    Nastyy

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    Wut up skamp

    peace JTS dope shit hope that's just a story

    fucked up man that shit had me tight I would of choked Her out word on momma yo
    hanging on every Word

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    Peace skamp and sinista



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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