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    Default Grims Final Chapter

    Fase in like a preminition
    Leave with suspitions, Dead, gettin inbaulmed ny mortitions
    Thoughts turn down to hour zero
    Its clear tho, I came on corp to to voice my opinions
    Not be a hero...

    Remember me R.I.P. to the vet
    Dont forget, I'll roam this mother fucka with a vengence u will regret
    To the vets of the battlefield, keep winning
    Turn the page fast, I'll soon make a new begining


    lil corny shit keep fightin dont forget me ya'll

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    Default Re: Grims Final Chapter

    What's G R?

    I see you're thinking about not posting on this site anymore ... how come?

    BTW, I didn't know you were 14. That being said, you have your whole life ahead of you, with plenty of options to explore, so don't be so down, okay? As far as you not being a "rapper" is concerned ... I'm sure that a lot of the cats you listen to everyday had that very same thought. Where would they be if they would have given up? If you believe in the game, you have to fight for it. Just keep at it and in time it will be like second nature to you. You'll be spittin' shit in your sleep ... but, you can't just give up ... and above all else, you have to want it first. You feel me?


    Keep your head up, and ...

    Peace




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    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

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    Default Re: Grims Final Chapter

    your shit is morbid your mind's out of orbit
    in darkness and confusion you seem lost like dat hobbit
    my suggestion, go get a psychiatric session
    cause sounds like yo ass may have serious depression
    pent up agression and sexual repressions
    too much dope, playstation and constant masturbation

    fascination with apoclaypse and death
    bro, this shit ain'g good fo yo health, so check yo self!
    dark thoughts runs through synapses
    traps like maze until you sanity snaps and collapses
    end up on matress with straight jacket
    tight stall padded white walls back and forth rockin'



    my lil corny shit, nothin personal, meant to be humorous. peace...

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    Default Re: Grims Final Chapter

    You keep throwin it down. If you're fourteen, you'll be dope at 20. Your vocabulary is very good, I thought you were much older. Keep it up, study rhyme, and take a break once in a while. It clears your mind, and you always come back with more juice.

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    Default Re: Grims Final Chapter

    dae some real nice words ...sounded like something i told him....
    but dont forget the age factor..
    nothing more than a actor..?
    i left some words of concerns...
    not so sure if i should of...
    enough said peace.
    HOW MANY SOULTRAINS LEFT IN THIS MENTAL PRISON

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