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    Default Do yall think i can take this further

    Can I get some honest opinions on if yall think I should persue this with my flow and swag?

    The tyler pics are for commercial reasons


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    YOU SOUND LIKE A GAY VERSION OF KENDRICK , IF KENDRICK JUST FINISHED HAVING SEX WITH DRAkE AND TYLER PERRY IS FUCKIN WACK

    IF U WANNA SOUND ILL USE THE BASS FROM YA CHEST U BITCH ASSNIGGA


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    haha aight thanks man, kendrick lamar is ill. thanks for the tip

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    why have i never heard you before? this is dope.
    we should collab some day.

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    STYLE WANTs TO BANG LOCUST


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    STYLE WANTs TO BANG ANY WHITE WUCORP MC's or BEATMAKERS.

    HE NEEDS HIS 'FIX'

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    not that bad

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    Quote Originally Posted by Louis Cypher View Post
    not that bad
    Thanx yo and thnx a lot style, nobody checks my shit in audio booth so thought id try here

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    i enjoyed it
    beat was tight too


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    Quote Originally Posted by Robbie Sinclair View Post
    STYLE WANTs TO BANG ANY WHITE WUCORP MC's or BEATMAKERS.

    HE NEEDS HIS 'FIX'
    hahahaha robby's jealous.
    you gettin old and your ass chin has gotten flabby.

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    invest in a proper mic. you got a creative flow some nice wordplay. if you really want people to listen it has to sound appealing.

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    this is not bad at all man.

    i think your flow is dope and i like how you rhyme

    this song, the lyrics wasnt bad at all. it fit the theme pretty well and it turned out to be a nice song

    the only thing i can say is that the track was a little long. I would have made it a little shorter so as to not lose people
    We do it for the people.


    "In the abundance of water, the fool is thirsty"


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    btw, i think its weird as fuck that you put pictures of tyler in your video lmao

    also you should stop using the term 'swag' and/or any other deviations of that word
    We do it for the people.


    "In the abundance of water, the fool is thirsty"


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    well i'm sure if you work on your vocab and content you will get a better response out of me but mainly work on that vocab learn the secrets of suffixes it works for Immortal technique

    you have your word play and flow down good

    do this and my "not bad" may increase to "pretty good" if you want anything higher then that from me you will need to work on your voice

    its kind of annoying


    i'm a vary difficult critic

    from 1-10

    Flow-7
    Wordplay-5
    Vocabulary-3
    Content-3

    beat-6
    voice-1

    over all=4(4.1)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Louis Cypher View Post
    well i'm sure if you work on your vocab and content you will get a better response out of me but mainly work on that vocab learn the secrets of suffixes it works for Immortal technique

    you have your word play and flow down good

    do this and my "not bad" may increase to "pretty good" if you want anything higher then that from me you will need to work on your voice

    its kind of annoying


    i'm a vary difficult critic

    from 1-10

    Flow-7
    Wordplay-5
    Vocabulary-3
    Content-3

    beat-6
    voice-1

    over all=4(4.1)
    Did you just tell somebody else to work on their vocab??

    Also, nobody who uses Immortal Technique as a syllabus should be allowed to critique or evaluate rapping ability.
    --youreallfags.


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    I'm sorry? Negro English? I think you mean Ebonics.

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