its not about your opinion on the music
everybody has one and none is less valid than another
its about how you write a review
enumerating "mistakes" and distributing points... none of this is factual yet you write it the same way i correct my students dissertations
music is about what you feel. a music writer works best when he describes what he feels when listening to an album, i dont know, let your mind flow and elaborate, look for the story thats been told through the sequencing of the tracks, the overall sound of the beats, the lyrics.... dont be so narrow minded and look for positive or negative points like a judge, taking it for facts.
writing about music should not be like dissecting a dead animal, thats why i dislike this review, theres no heart in it.