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    smoke-blaze
    torch up the bud
    exhale immense amounts of blood
    causing a street flood
    this all takes place beneath the mud
    my thoughts spread like a theroy
    i like my beats dark and eerie
    heart beats so fast its teary
    skitzafrnik furry
    clearly
    i need help
    so i smoke wet weed thats called kelp
    it makes me relax
    helps me win battle tracks
    my tongue is a slashing axe
    rhymes crush through your bottled up ear wax
    directly contacts
    with the brain it collapse
    im a owner of ancient artifacts
    perhaps
    im drinkin shots of shnapps on top of book stacks
    filled with knowledgable
    facts
    avoiding mind traps
    make a quick escape through a time lapse
    visit camp nightmare
    to survive here
    you must face your deepest fear
    spit a lyrical spear
    into your ear
    so you hear it clear
    a magnificnet sound you love to hear
    then suddenly i appearin a 3 dimensional sphere
    its the final frontier
    travled here
    unknown year
    i am the orginal member of the children of the corn
    leave your parents bodies ripped up and torn
    sworn
    alliance with every day kithcen house applinace
    obligated to speak highly of the science
    terminated definace
    being chased by the iron fucking giants
    equppied with silenced pistols
    its all i need to obtain the dark black crystals

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    any input?

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    halloweens my night just like jack skellington
    more chink eyed then a scarfaced pelican
    my outer flesh is just a human replicant
    i toss rubber ducks right at your chest relaeasing all your inner intestines and guts
    its been a rough day the ashtray is filled with ciggarette buts
    rhymes so cold i leave em out to thaw
    and this flow is a middle finger to the lackluster performance of the law
    id like to see you try to talk your way out of this
    instant replay is enough evidnece
    to prove the theory of rambling reefer residents
    or pathetic presidents
    i easily remove the tissue from your ligaments
    and bang the fuck outta them like drum instruments
    irony is irrelvance
    it aint no mystery
    i dont recive pain nor injury
    i take pain and charge it into positve energy
    lyrical landscape imagery
    the end of the world is all i see
    stuck up phramacys
    with gun in your face style robberies

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