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Thread: is there a song that combines rhyme structure/imagery better than 'Sweet Baby James'

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    Default is there a song that combines rhyme structure/imagery better than 'Sweet Baby James'

    there is a young cowboy, he lives on the range
    his horse and his cattle are his only companions
    he works in the saddle and he sleeps in the canyons
    waiting for summer, his pastures to change

    and as the moon rises he sits by his fire
    thinking about women and glasses of beer
    and closing his eyes as the dogies retire
    he sings out a song which is soft but it's clear
    as if maybe someone could hear

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    Dylan was the man with rhyme structure and such, ill think of some more later but ya plenty of songs

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