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    I just wrote this on the spot, on some run mentality shit, knamean, some off the top of the dome shit

    I put it on yall dusty ass niggas, tryna jump work
    but yo we movin on, jump off mentality,
    let the pump off, push ya weight off the balance beam
    and get ya steez up, Pablo Escaborro re-up
    the next man of tommorow, the kid is movin
    play ya position, flippin crates in the buildin
    my whole team set mean-bred, mutha-fuckin jail killers
    you want somethin? then we kick it bitch
    gimme a minute kid, keep playin the back
    or get ya wig split, this ain't no try outs
    show you the lifestyle, this ain't no colgate
    but we still catch white vowels, nigga hold weight
    cut it four ways, pass it off, take the backdoor, blast yall
    run with the budget through the door
    get to the car, backalley crackfiends
    demonstrate how they light it up
    but never sweat the fed cars, minus the blood
    out of breath, no Luthor, the style is Lex
    from here to little italy, kiddo's snitchin me
    the black man, behold the future, we talk murder
    like brushin teeth with a killers toothpaste
    and we in the hood like money in silver suitcases
    we probably all blood brothers, thugs hustlers
    knuckle up, a couple of bucks and its the same shit, muthafucka what


    gimme yall thoughts on this

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    Default Re: some real shit

    Yah that was explict, and how you combined the rhymes!!!!!!!!!!!! Though it sounded as if you were busting? Nice flow disorganized but organized, we notice most of this type of lyrics here. But the way you put the context accross was well placed. Like to see more of you verses.

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    Definitely tight, sounded like a cosmopolitan mix of AZ, Nas, and I even saw a little Ghost at the beginning...definitely tight, street rhymes...you told a story, explained it (albeit profanely), and pulled it off...SHIT! That was nice, fam...keep it up...peace.

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    thanks fam, keep yall thoughts coming

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    Yo, good shit, thanx for letting me peep this. I like the story telling concept you gave. It's ill yo, keep it up.

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    dont sleep

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    decent verse in reguards of flow....alota shit u mentioned already bin sed....if youo sayin it you gotta say it betta then who eva sayin it best.....

    Basically i think you can convey tha streets betta den that......

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    my honest thoughts: it barely rhymed at all... and therefore, i couldn't sit through it's entirety... work on it...

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    Wack, sorry.

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