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    verse one

    leaving the past unmasked is a rough task questions enough asked
    So let a new day start i meditated as half the day passed
    tickets and bills payed know i'm leaning with very little cash
    big heart and ego like the panthers it's power to the people
    it's seems were still unequal ruled by the elite evil's
    i couldn't operate my level was feeble
    leave you thinking about attacking from words of the reaction
    without defense no action why are the higher-up's acting?
    like nothing is wrong it's the same dances, and songs
    plus trees we roll or pull out of a bong
    now the weak are becoming strong enough to get it on
    and become owners instead of bums, and loners
    active wisdom in practice so we can achieve
    a power that was man-made i could never believe
    polluted air in my atmosphere it's a fear to breathe

    Hook


    clouded visionz of missions uncompleted
    we never retreated still undefeated

    v2

    tired of fighting demons i can't see too brave to flee
    half my life a wanderer but never a wannabe
    blinded by the sun-light reflecting off the sea
    metaphorically my minds a university
    enough niggas backing me to rush a city
    generous acts my words soaked in facts
    slackers in slacks mimic my raps
    vocals recorded for a 5 stack
    pretty women had my mind trapped
    head hurting wearing a grind cap
    it's obvious he's broke hustling for smokes
    a fast car that broke-down for most
    memorable like the freedom trail
    until my dreams de-railed i failed
    women ruining their faces lacking inner-beauty
    this world is plastic soon to melt truly
    that's why i'm hostile with hot styles and so unruly
    saluting no men but my soulja's and sisters
    my expected wreckage call it the twister
    hit ya with no thought the truth lifter
    headed for zion with the iron the ironic mic ripper
    Last edited by Mantra; 08-29-2011 at 09:58 AM.



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    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    damn J i love the pic you painted with this, you can see it visually as you read it
    and you really grab the listener/the reader/the consumer with this

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    Damn this was powerful JTS.

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    thanks guys..



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    that 1st verse killed

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    big up's king!



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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    it's obvious he's broke hustling for smokes
    a fast car that broke-down for most
    memorable like the freedom trail
    until my dreams de-railed i failed
    women ruining their faces lacking inner-beauty
    this world is plastic soon to melt truly
    that's why i'm hostile with hot styles and so unruly


    some poetic shit write there nice

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    thanks sinista!



    My evidence, my own testament, written on wood
    Twelve tribes layin at the head of corners in hoods
    Hell razah

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