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    Gunfinga Infantry General Knok-A-Fella's Avatar
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    Default the new letter "P"

    i read the other threads that begin with A and D
    i thought id try it with the letter "P"
    here it is drop some feedback


    Pessimistic politicians propose perverse propaganda
    Purposely prosecute political panorama
    Poor parents predict painful parallel paralysis
    Partners partake partial paternal partnership
    Patriotic parliaments patronize pastime penalties
    Privacy protects philosophical philosophies
    Perverts penetrate personal property
    Police permits preserve persecution permanently
    Pleasure playmate pinups pleasing pinnacle politics
    Professional prodigies produce profound promises

    Criticism of any knid greatly appreciated

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    Default Re: the new letter "P"

    Quote Originally Posted by Knok-A-Fella
    i read the other threads that begin with A and D
    i thought id try it with the letter "P"
    here it is drop some feedback


    Pessimistic politicians propose perverse propaganda
    Purposely prosecute political panorama
    Poor parents predict painful parallel paralysis
    Partners partake partial paternal partnership
    Patriotic parliaments patronize pastime penalties
    Privacy protects philosophical philosophies
    Perverts penetrate personal property
    Police permits preserve persecution permanently
    Pleasure playmate pinups pleasing pinnacle politics
    Professional prodigies produce profound promises

    Criticism of any knid greatly appreciated

    Bless, 1
    Your lines have real meaning and they rhyme ... IMO, you did a damn good job dropping on the "P-Tip" ... ... reminds me of two other cats back in the day.



    Peace




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

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    Default Re: the new letter "P"

    Quote Originally Posted by Knok-A-Fella
    i read the other threads that begin with A and D
    i thought id try it with the letter "P"
    here it is drop some feedback


    Pessimistic politicians propose perverse propaganda
    Purposely prosecute political panorama
    Poor parents predict painful parallel paralysis
    Partners partake partial paternal partnership
    Patriotic parliaments patronize pastime penalties
    Privacy protects philosophical philosophies
    Perverts penetrate personal property
    Police permits preserve persecution permanently
    Pleasure playmate pinups pleasing pinnacle politics
    Professional prodigies produce profound promises

    Criticism of any knid greatly appreciated

    Bless, 1
    Yeah, Reminds me of Papoose from beast from the east mix cd.....

    I was gonna try suin like that spellin mu name......test tha skills, see if i still got it.....

    Nice drop

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    OUT SOON

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    Default Re: the new letter "P"

    ye i tried to make it all make sense
    shit was hard

    thanks for criticism

    need more feedback

    comparison to papoose put a smile on my face

    lol

    Bless,1


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    plagerizing protagonist preparing,
    prime-time paralysis peers pairing,
    predisposed prejudices penetrating,
    pinpointed prisons positive propagating,

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    Good jump fam...I see cats biting the whole Papoose/Saigon "Alphabetical Slaughter/The Letter P" shit and you nailed it...peace.

    "Got heat for everybody/watch the microphone burn..."
    =Akrobatik

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    thanx for all the criticism i chose to do this cos i wanted to see if i could do all aspects of rappin

    so with the criticism i got i'll take it as a good thing

    Bless,1

    oh and bigben, GOOD DROP


    my style and flow is dark like afghanistan dungeons//
    im about to blow up like seven parts of central london - Khrome Khaliba

    You beatin me is physically and psychological impossible// like paraplegic patients dreamin of walkin horizontal - Khrome Khaliba

    fuk a pregnant bitch my dicks so quik it makes sparks//
    dipped my dik in acid and left the baby with a birthmark - Khrome Khaliba

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