sounds like my shit did before i bought a mic. like you recorded it with the built in mic on your comp. your bars are dope. i'd work on staying in the pocket of the beat tho.
overall it was okay but it has the potential to be dope. i'd call this one a "1st take" and do it one more time.
im feeling it my dude. nice work
yeah man i be like that sometimes. you could spit the dopest verse in history and the wrong set up it can ruin it. i got a rack of ongs that i cant even listen to now cause the set up fucked it up.
$100 can get you a nice usb mic. in the long run, its worth it.