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    havent posted anything on here in a while

    once again, i descend the dense marshes mirk/
    step to earth, a swarm of meteors befriends my birth/
    stem of worth, blooms in the falcons blur/
    storm turfs of vultures then blend them into curbs/
    i sent my words... to war the steel trojans/
    warriors feriocious, but lost, left afloat in ghost ships/
    stand alone, so now i roam the catabombs/
    head home, relax... your shattered fractured bones/
    cuz your verse structure didnt work and it crumbled/
    in this jungle, i'm a leaping tiger in the furns/
    refined conscious... when lost in silent solace/
    the minds torches light, and blinds your fibre optics/
    try to dodge this viper nosedive apocalypse/
    shine emanates... behind the mace of this horror shit/
    flow penetrates, icicles rain upon your face/
    scorching flames surge ballet with a burning grace/
    a turn of fate... i find myself in seductive clutches/
    of creativity, slave of verbal substance/
    worthless rappers burn inside the falcons furnace/
    spit verbs, inflict the curse, watch rappers flee and disperse/

    '

    give me honest opinions

    peace

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    good to see you back on the corp

    a true lyricist legend

    i liked this piece alot

    especially

    "flow penetrates, icicles rain upon your face/
    scorching flames surge ballet with a burning grace/
    a turn of fate... i find myself in seductive clutches/
    of creativity, slave of verbal substance/
    worthless rappers burn inside the falcons furnace/
    spit verbs, inflict the curse, watch rappers flee and disperse/"


    these lines are the best on the verse

    they flow like water from the river nile

    Keep postin up

    Bless,1


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    Default Re: The Art Of Flame Ballet

    yea the lyrics are nice..i like ur work

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    sup Winte



    once again, i descend the dense marshes mirk/
    step to earth, a swarm of meteors befriends my birth/
    stem of worth, blooms in the falcons blur/
    storm turfs of vultures then blend them into curbs/
    i sent my words... to war the steel trojans/
    warriors feriocious, but lost, left afloat in ghost ships/
    stand alone, so now i roam the catabombs/
    head home, relax... your shattered fractured bones/
    cuz your verse structure didnt work and it crumbled/
    in this jungle, i'm a leaping tiger in the furns/
    refined conscious... when lost in silent solace/
    the minds torches light, and blinds your fibre optics/
    try to dodge this viper nosedive apocalypse/
    shine emanates... behind the mace of this horror shit/
    flow penetrates, icicles rain upon your face/
    scorching flames surge ballet with a burning grace/
    a turn of fate... i find myself in seductive clutches/
    of creativity, slave of verbal substance/
    worthless rappers burn inside the falcons furnace/
    spit verbs, inflict the curse, watch rappers flee and disperse/


    Tha highlighted parts are whut i liked most.....Your overall ryme is tight.....
    Imagery is definately there thou ive seen betta from you from an imagery perspective.....


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    Yah i guess you're warming up? Definately want to check more of your posts here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Peace

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    Your Verse Structure Didnt Crumble

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    da shit
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    Very nice, hott

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    Default Re: The Art Of Flame Ballet

    Quote Originally Posted by winte
    havent posted anything on here in a while

    once again, i descend the dense marshes mirk/
    step to earth, a swarm of meteors befriends my birth/
    stem of worth, blooms in the falcons blur/
    storm turfs of vultures then blend them into curbs/
    i sent my words... to war the steel trojans/
    warriors feriocious, but lost, left afloat in ghost ships/
    stand alone, so now i roam the catabombs/
    head home, relax... your shattered fractured bones/
    cuz your verse structure didnt work and it crumbled/
    in this jungle, i'm a leaping tiger in the furns/
    refined conscious... when lost in silent solace/
    the minds torches light, and blinds your fibre optics/
    try to dodge this viper nosedive apocalypse/
    shine emanates... behind the mace of this horror shit/
    flow penetrates, icicles rain upon your face/
    scorching flames surge ballet with a burning grace/
    a turn of fate... i find myself in seductive clutches/
    of creativity, slave of verbal substance/
    worthless rappers burn inside the falcons furnace/
    spit verbs, inflict the curse, watch rappers flee and disperse/

    '

    give me honest opinions

    peace
    Hot *isht right here man ... very smooth, dark flow. Kinda reminds me cd's writing style.

    Peace




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    Default Re: The Art Of Flame Ballet

    dope shit man, how are u winte?

    i like the flow and imagery, poetic shit son props

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    thanks a lot for the feedback everyone

    yeah, i'm good ronin, just been workin on more music.... got my EP coming soon and i'll post more stuff up in the meantime

    peace

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