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    Default The Set Up - Dance with the devil beat

    this is a story rhyme about the drug bizniz and the revenge that comes with it


    The Set Up
    verse 1

    31st of august, 1992
    tha day the world will no the truth
    hatred grows in the darkest of places
    the minds of psychopaths, murderers and rapists
    always come prepared pakin them hollow cases
    spoon, foil, lighter heroin traces
    so me and my bois we all stood up
    pulled are shit together, all hooded up
    followed this dude to a blacked out rover
    windows blowed down startin rollin over
    lookin all around bullets rippin thru
    last man standin of my entire cru
    it was a set up, we got ambushed
    but it hit reality wen i felt a push
    some motherfuker just slit my throat
    spillin my blood all over tha road
    my bloods boilin i can hardly breathe
    but i couldnt move an inch not even to leave
    so i had to stay there and hear the screams
    hole in every organ just shattered my dreams
    we were gonna start a clique not to be messed with
    gunfinga infantry armshouse specialist
    used to spend all day just bunnin herbs
    main purpose on this world was to change the earth
    chorus

    brand new gat never roll without one
    not goin early like 2pac or big pun
    tyrna get out but enjoy the big hunt
    me and my clique pakin submachine guns
    itchy trigger fingers just blastin back
    hk5 and they packin macs
    makin no room cos they wearin flaks
    its a set up, blrap blrap blrap

    verse 2

    on a respirator cant breathe without one
    internally bleedin cos a bullets in my lung
    breathin, spittin chokin on my blood
    it was a close call my time was up
    officially dead at 2.45
    half past dead but im still alive
    had to choose between hell or heaven
    if i chose heaven never get to cock bak a weapon
    so i had to choose hell to get my revenge
    never learn a lesson bustin 2 smith n wessuns
    if i catch the motherfuker that slit my throat
    rip a hole in his head with a gold dayton spoke
    cos i found it out he was a snitch a mole
    open up his head and piss in his skull
    6 months of rehab b4 i do shit
    spent most of my time learnin how to spit
    got bak on the streets with a new nikname
    knok-a-fella wot it is im new in the game
    buildin street cred cos im a ruthless villian
    cappin random dudes makin sure i kill em
    wen i got a call from the gang that done it
    put my foot to tha floor handbrake off, i gunned it
    got to tha meetin, everyone blacked out
    i saw the motherfuker that slit my mouth
    chorus

    invited to meet with the main bag carrier
    comes to the meetin not strapped, bull terrier
    metaphors drop bombs blows away barriers
    lyrical f-3 tomahawk harrier
    made in great britian the dogs a expert
    at sniffin out pigs if they wired or invert
    if the dog bites me ima take my third
    rite between the eyes the dog wont get hurt
    but first, gentlemen lets do bizni
    ur my hired gun or u can deal wit slit wrists
    so i looked at him rite dead in the eyes
    he said ur probably much faster but im bigger in size
    i dont give to shits u executed my clique
    so just hand me the money it'll be over real quik
    heard henchmen in the background reachin for they strap
    next thing i know im hearin blap blap blap
    they tried it again but i came prepared
    the head of the boss in my crosshairs
    bang bang bang three shots to sternum
    threw away my clothes soaked em up and i burned em
    next day on the news a warehouse of bodies
    undercover agents swarmin around the rockies
    knock on the door then guess hu i saw
    this is special agent dawson open the front door
    we got a warrant for your arrest n to search the flat
    lookin for evidence that'll tie me to that
    but they got nuttin they cant tie me to that
    luky the safe was locked or that was that
    they would have found an ounce and 45 gat
    no hollows in the chamber or in the mag
    just empty shell cases like the body bags
    suitfcase of drug money a holster of drugs
    liitle did they no im a big time thug
    like tony montana im comin up in the world
    enough money in my poket to buy pink pearls
    the cops found nuffin im guilty as sin
    i killed 13 people with the help of a pin



    Tell me wot u think
    hope u all like it

    this is the first piece i wrote after a year barke of rappin
    so excus me if its a bit rusty

    all feedback (positive or negative) is appreciated

    Bless, 1


    my style and flow is dark like afghanistan dungeons//
    im about to blow up like seven parts of central london - Khrome Khaliba

    You beatin me is physically and psychological impossible// like paraplegic patients dreamin of walkin horizontal - Khrome Khaliba

    fuk a pregnant bitch my dicks so quik it makes sparks//
    dipped my dik in acid and left the baby with a birthmark - Khrome Khaliba

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    Default Re: The Set Up - Dance with the devil beat

    nice story.....u should make more like that like story telling type shit

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    Default Re: The Set Up - Dance with the devil beat

    Yes you had it well thoughtout but i thought you left out a few details as you tried to keep the flow, whilst on point!!!!!!!!!!!111 but its quite dramatic, nice verses (and long also). But nice!!

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    Default Re: The Set Up - Dance with the devil beat

    thanx for the criticism

    and guradian its long cos the beat is 5 mins 30 secs

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    my style and flow is dark like afghanistan dungeons//
    im about to blow up like seven parts of central london - Khrome Khaliba

    You beatin me is physically and psychological impossible// like paraplegic patients dreamin of walkin horizontal - Khrome Khaliba

    fuk a pregnant bitch my dicks so quik it makes sparks//
    dipped my dik in acid and left the baby with a birthmark - Khrome Khaliba

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    Default Re: The Set Up - Dance with the devil beat

    Quote Originally Posted by Knok-A-Fella
    thanx for the criticism

    and guradian its long cos the beat is 5 mins 30 secs

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    Yah i understand, but its alright!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Generally most beats are about that amount of time.

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    Default Re: The Set Up - Dance with the devil beat

    aight aight

    More feedback Please

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    my style and flow is dark like afghanistan dungeons//
    im about to blow up like seven parts of central london - Khrome Khaliba

    You beatin me is physically and psychological impossible// like paraplegic patients dreamin of walkin horizontal - Khrome Khaliba

    fuk a pregnant bitch my dicks so quik it makes sparks//
    dipped my dik in acid and left the baby with a birthmark - Khrome Khaliba

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