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    Default The minds of man

    Hittin with exquisite compositions, deadly persition,
    breaking you out that mental prison,
    spittin scrolls written with ancient wisdoms, seeing future visions,
    shearing knowledge given by the all seeing being,
    devils fleeing in panic by the way retributions handed,
    trying to move minds stranded,
    drastic measures must be taken to find mental treasures,
    they say pleasure of the soul are better then those of the body,
    but I cant seem to find them trapped in the despair of poverty,
    I was born to forfil prophecy,
    on a mission to destroy divisions of humanity,
    evolution of the mind out the pits of insanity,
    to reach higher levels of reality,
    most minds aint ready for the truth, i destroy lies savagely,
    the devils trickery and lies be deceiving the unwise,
    treachery I despise, cant catch me in his evil plan,
    above it I rise bring with me the minds of man.

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    it flows nice ...keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by 100pr00f
    it flows nice ...keep it up
    No doubt ... Peace




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

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    Hittin with exquisite compositions, deadly persition,
    breaking you out that mental prison,
    spittin scrolls written with ancient wisdoms, seeing future visions,
    shearing knowledge given by the all seeing being,
    devils fleeing in panic by the way retributions handed,
    trying to move minds stranded,
    drastic measures must be taken to find mental treasures,
    they say pleasure of the soul are better then those of the body,
    but I cant seem to find them trapped in the despair of poverty,
    I was born to forfil prophecy,
    on a mission to destroy divisions of humanity,
    evolution of the mind out the pits of insanity,
    to reach higher levels of reality,
    most minds aint ready for the truth, i destroy lies savagely,
    the devils trickery and lies be deceiving the unwise,
    treachery I despise, cant catch me in his evil plan,
    above it I rise bring with me the minds of man.


    A few gems uppin this piece bruh....keep it moovin'

    ORPHANS OF CUSH

    OUT SOON

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cap I
    Hittin with exquisite compositions, deadly persition,
    breaking you out that mental prison,
    spittin scrolls written with ancient wisdoms, seeing future visions,
    shearing knowledge given by the all seeing being,
    devils fleeing in panic by the way retributions handed,
    trying to move minds stranded,
    drastic measures must be taken to find mental treasures,
    they say pleasure of the soul are better then those of the body,
    but I cant seem to find them trapped in the despair of poverty,
    I was born to forfil prophecy,
    on a mission to destroy divisions of humanity,
    evolution of the mind out the pits of insanity,
    to reach higher levels of reality,
    most minds aint ready for the truth, i destroy lies savagely,
    the devils trickery and lies be deceiving the unwise,
    treachery I despise, cant catch me in his evil plan,
    above it I rise bring with me the minds of man.
    The colored parts is what i think is your true style, and for you to bring this verse in such a way is very talented. Your style is quite unique, whilst they are parts that flow which bring a sense of accomplishment (in you lyrics). Respect , this is another new style up in here (Darts of Knowledge). You need to expand on your style (like the colored parts thats your style).

    Repect
    Peace
    PS: Continue posting, we expect that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Default Re: The minds of man

    Damn niceness

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    Thanks for the feedback. I use to post on here but I been gone for a while.

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