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    Default The Psyche part 1

    I was only eight when my teachers told my parents I wasn’t shit
    A short fifty-something blonde playing John Broadus
    My moms gave me a list of the people who made it in pop culture
    Trying to mold my future from attention deficit disorder
    Saw Magic Johnson on the list and wanted to be him
    Without knowing what the fuck H.I.V. is
    So I pounded the concrete with a rubber ball, and didn’t accomplish shit
    The only way I felt special was through my philosophical writings
    Where I could pretend to be a drug dealer, a warlord, or a thug
    And turned this psychological experiment into a drug
    That I could never kick like Coltrane did heroin
    This neurotic narcotic helped me develop my own injections
    Would help me detox from my day like a hot dose of horse
    But my life was destined to take its own course
    Few friends so I created my own world in which I was king
    From basketball to music, I was God, and wrote down my theologies
    Known to many as a wannabe
    Noticed subtle suburban racism when I rocked my first FUBU tee
    Asked me if I wanted to be Black
    Tried to take it as a compliment, but their country club minds couldn’t adapt
    To the fact that my mindstate was cultured from petri plates
    That included godsisters from the worst ghettos in the state
    Cabrini-Green women who forced me into an affair with Hip-Hop
    From Kris Kross, to stuttering, “Ya D-Don’t stop!”
    I rubbed the arms on our love seats to get the sound of scratching
    Ten years later, I converted that love into rapping…

    "Got heat for everybody/watch the microphone burn..."
    =Akrobatik

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    Default Re: The Psyche part 1

    hey i like it...lol its a lil funny

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    Default Re: The Psyche part 1

    Tried to model it after "Poet Laureate II"...

    "Got heat for everybody/watch the microphone burn..."
    =Akrobatik

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    Default Re: The Psyche part 1

    Life ... what a beautiful struggle




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers that’s deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts that’s so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

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    Default Re: The Psyche part 1

    It was simple but realistic, expressions like this are difficult to explain especially for most artist, cause they try and portray a certain attitude. Nice verse!

    Peace

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    nice verse. i can see it flowing nicely to a beat, did you make a track of this? good to see you postin new material on here

    peace

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