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    NEEDLE SOWIN UP THREADS ON POINT's Avatar
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    MURDEROUS......VERSE.......FROM........THE........ ..FRONT......LINES

    SERVIN........YOU...........THIS.............CURSE ...........ON...........TIME

    AND...........ARENT...........MINE...........ALLRI GHT........YEAH.......THEY

    SWERVIN..........THAT ............OF............RHYMIN............SO.... .....CLEVERS'

    MY..............GOOD...........DIAMONDS.........AR E...........FOR..........EVER


    AFTER YOU READ THESE ROWS GO BACK AND READ THE COLUMNS,
    JUST A STYLE IM WORKIN ON FOR COMPLEXITY

    PEACE

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    Quote Originally Posted by ON POINT









    MURDEROUS......VERSE.......FROM........THE........ ..FRONT......LINES

    SERVIN........YOU...........THIS.............CURSE ...........ON...........TIME

    AND...........ARENT...........MINE...........ALLRI GHT........YEAH.......THEY

    SWERVIN..........THAT ............OF............RHYMIN............SO.... .....CLEVERS'

    MY..............GOOD...........DIAMONDS.........AR E...........FOR..........EVER






    AFTER YOU READ THESE ROWS GO BACK AND READ THE COLUMNS,
    JUST A STYLE IM WORKIN ON FOR COMPLEXITY

    PEACE






    MURDEROUS......VERSE.......FROM........THE........ ..FRONT......LINES

    SERVIN........YOU...........THIS.............CURSE ...........ON...........TIME

    AND...........ARENT...........MINE...........ALLRI GHT........YEAH.......THEY

    SWERVIN..........THAT ............OF............RHYMIN............SO.... .....CLEVERS'

    MY..............GOOD...........DIAMONDS.........AR E...........FOR..........EVER

    MURDEROUS SERVIN AND SWERVIN MY VERSE ...

    That was really cool

    Peace




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    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
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    Default Re: Check This Out

    I don't know why the org. post didn't line up correctly, but you can see the clolums well when you quote the post ... go figure




    I sew...
    beautiful seeds that sprout flowers thatís deeply rooted
    your weak style-diluted with concepts thatís so polluted
    my words flourish, creating jewels the conscious will cherish ...

    -- Dae Ja Nae

    http://www.soundclick.com/daejanae
    http://wutangcorp.com/showthread.php?t=11503


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    Nice imagination putting the verse in such a style (double meaning). But doesn't really make sense doing that (i mean the creativity-in content).But creatively its nice ,good thought there!!!!!!!!!!!

    Peace

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