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Thread: WINNER----->adedwutang Vs J-Man

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    Exclamation WINNER----->adedwutang Vs J-Man

    YO the last one didnt go dat gr8 also lost da thread lol but dats cos i didnt rly have ne time but this is an open challenge just to one Emcee out dere to have a god wid me, im just starting up so probs wont b gr8 but plz i wanna battle

    ASAP!

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    ey yo step back kid or u can catch a bid/
    playin it off like u dont kno wat u did/
    lemme get rid of this dude on his open challenge battle/
    ima drive u off like i was herdin cattle/
    leave ya ass in pain like u rode a horse wit no saddle/
    lets play ur favorite game, i tell a tale and u tattle/
    the caption for ya avatar is HE DID IT MAN DONT LOOK AT ME/
    ima make u retire before u start just so u can c/
    dont challenge the best when ur weak/
    cuz u inevitably will b beat/
    ill take on anything that u can bring/
    like a broken bat held togther wit string/
    homey ya shit just dont swing/
    ima finish off real plain, simple, and sweet/
    u just been raped, ur no longer fresh meat/

    get at me-
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
    Follow me @SkiLLs456

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    u on bout rapping me yeh right,
    fuck off ass rapest go fight for ur right,
    to marry other men, n ill say it again,
    your rhymes cuz they ain't that tight,
    just like u press, i aint that fresh,
    but i dont care i here to recompress; this rap industry
    u sounding like John Cena and you can't see me,
    u clam ur the best and i am weak,
    step off bitch you bout to be beat,
    down and cuz u aint coming bak,
    im droping these lyrical bombs,
    like babies from the new found moms,
    im glad you took up da chance,
    cos ill b bk cos i can hear the chants,
    they're callin for J-Man not some wanna be Peter Pan
    Last edited by J-Man; 04-20-2006 at 10:45 AM.

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    i think that adedwu took this one,because, his punches hit harder and his verse made a lot of sense

    J-Man keep working at it your first battle is always the toughest

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    yo chrz man i thought i was gettin weak towards the end but hey i gotta learn some how so 1-0 adedwutang

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    ey yo lets get some votes people
    get at me-
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
    Follow me @SkiLLs456

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    ey yo step back kid or u can catch a bid/
    playin it off like u dont kno wat u did/
    (Half-decent opener.)
    lemme get rid of this dude on his open challenge battle/
    ima drive u off like i was herdin cattle/
    (Decent punch here.)
    leave ya ass in pain like u rode a horse wit no saddle/
    lets play ur favorite game, i tell a tale and u tattle/
    (Okay, first line could be mistaken for some homo line. Decent punch nontheless.)
    the caption for ya avatar is HE DID IT MAN DONT LOOK AT ME/
    ima make u retire before u start just so u can c/
    (Decent punch, playin' the avatar, good.)
    dont challenge the best when ur weak/
    cuz u inevitably will b beat/
    (Okay, not good punch. Played concept.)
    ill take on anything that u can bring/
    like a broken bat held togther wit string/
    homey ya shit just dont swing/
    (Good punch here.)
    ima finish off real plain, simple, and sweet/
    u just been raped, ur no longer fresh meat/
    (Decent closer.)


    u on bout rapping me yeh right,
    fuck off ass rapest go fight for ur right,
    (Some multis, but end rhyming the same word sucks. Not too good of a opener here.)
    to marry other men, n ill say it again,
    (Maybe a bar in itself? Half-decent. Played concept. Should've been worded different for a better punch. )
    your rhymes cuz they ain't that tight,
    just like u press, i aint that fresh,
    (Really, this verse is lookin' kinda choppy to me. And you sort of dissed yourself here....)
    but i dont care i here to recompress; this rap industry
    u sounding like John Cena and you can't see me,
    (Half-decent punch here.)
    u claim ur the best and i am weak,
    step off bitch you bout to be beat,
    (.....Half-decent at best here.)
    down and cuz u aint coming bak,
    im droping these lyrical bombs,
    like babies from the new found moms,
    (First line = why is it here? Rhymes with nothing in this. You're bragging on yourself here. You BATTLE on the BATTLEFIELD. Bragging on yourself is like taking a knife to a gunfight and talkin' shit.)
    im glad you took up da chance,
    cos ill b bk cos i can hear the chants,
    (....Half-decent.)
    they're callin for J-Man not some wanna be Peter Pan
    (Half-decent at best closer.)

    Vote : Adedwutang
    Verse was stronger then his opponent's. Harder punches, better flow, structure, etc.
    J-Man you just need some pointers and some elevation. Keep battlin'. Experience is the best teacher. Don't brag on yourself in battles unless it's VERY BRIEF. Don't ever do a bar in a battle just about yourself. The point of battling is to DISS YOUR OPPONENT. GET AT THEM!
    Make your battles "Classic".

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    fuck Nightwolf simple as that

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    I vote for adedwutang
    "Who's the wickedest, street officialist, Guess, Gortex
    Lex is the crispiest, ice the vidiculous
    Peep and look, the unexplainable'll keep ya shook
    High illism, the realism got you hooked"
    AZ - Doe or Die (Rza Remix)

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    3-0, call it a knockout, u did pretty good for ur first battle j-man, just remember to keep writin and youll get better since u still really yung
    get at me-
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
    Follow me @SkiLLs456

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    well m8 yeh ill post dis on the stats 1 deafeat lol but im here just to have a good time rly maybe ill hit u bk l8r some time for rematch

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    no doubt man, battles to build, aint nothin betta
    get at me-
    "i got drug spots from NY to Canada/
    cuz Big L b fuckin wit more keys then a janita/"
    Follow me @SkiLLs456

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    2-0 The last vote needs to be explained

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    yo vote ppl we need some votes

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    flow - J
    vocab - adedwutang
    w/p - adedwutang
    creativity - tie
    punches - adedwutang


    good battle , adedwutang gets my vote here

    just came lil stronger than J , peace

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