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    Neb-maat Ra
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    Equestrians await, pedestrian proceed through guarded gates,
    con artists fate, darts hit ‘em sentinels, sedate
    Indeed entrance provided slide in straight into the city’s heart
    like syringe shots, lots of booths at the market-place
    craftsmen and artisans create, the crowd debates
    till the arrival of irate partisans slaughtering mongers, monks
    and the cardinal- taking the gardens green
    smashing cathedral to smithereens, defiling the most high being-
    left’s an island in the Nile held by dead pharaos profiling
    The hostile assailants seeking signs of feebleness in the foe’s lines
    but the lines closed Shaolins defending their minds ramping like rhinos
    stamping the enemies’ flash to cemetery-ash, penalty clash
    yet the remedy act aborts tha rival lords aware of the stance at the shore
    saw their chance in reward bought pharao-auxiliary defending-off hordes
    which sold their souls to the devil, cheddar-coins sharps
    their hands cut roll down to the level of the river incisive darts
    delivered into their dishevelled hair, their eyes show shiver

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    Default Re: Heliopolis

    Quite nice, new type of word arangement, sharp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And nice portral also (seemed violent) deadly actually.

    Weres/or whats chinguetti?
    Like to check more of your lyrics

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    Default Re: Heliopolis

    shits ill, but kinda hard to follow
    "ya'll niggas can't be serious, i was nice before ice, before christ, before the the words let there be light, and the light took over the night, i was born wit the mic, lord of the mic before all plant and animal life, took this rap shit to new heights before the wright brothers took flight, before dogfightin' and aerial strikes, before mc's picked up pens and started to write" - Canibus

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    Thank's for your reactions! Really appreciate it!

    Chinguetti is the place my mind (though not my body) lives in, an oasis in the desert of Sahara - the ancient city of wisdom.
    Look at my nephew, he jumped at the window just to see you (The Sun - Ghostface, Rza, Raekwon and Slick Rick)

    http://www.myspace.com/racailla

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