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    All things that happen to me are never for the worst/
    I can still get respect wit out havin to cusre/
    never back for the first or last time ever/
    you cant beat me cause ima better competitor/
    Illmatic magnetic drug free creation/
    I dodge the blows you throw wit a quik evasion/
    Kick it evry style drop the beat and go acapella/
    Im too dope for evry label even roc-a-fella/
    skip superman this time im the hero/
    of a world that counts startin wit negative zero/
    tainted mind in a bind its so twisted/
    so cross my path if you think you can risk it/
    evry thought just pops into my head in like an instant/
    Ya future will never happen cause its so distant/
    purposly throwin off ya equalibrium/
    creatin a language only known now as an idiom/

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    Default Re: check my rhyme style

    this is a dope verse aint it.

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    Default Re: check my rhyme style

    at first, i was thinkin' this sounded like a 13 year old wrote this, and then i realized: a 13 year old did write this... so i guess you're where you should be... LOL

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    Default Re: check my rhyme style

    Cool and simple, i suppose you were busting. Keep posting!!!!!!!!!!!!!With time you will find you style and improve on it

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