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    S-Man
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    Default yo, check dis shit

    yo, like John Cena ya'll can't see me/
    I iz sicker than a hippie on DMT/
    When S-Man steps up in da place/
    I lean back checkin out da fear in ya face/
    Big up London wit da soufside crews/
    fuck wit us, ya bound ta lose/
    packin mad gats, n wearin vests/
    ma crew rulez over tha rest/
    yo, i iz aggressive man, don't piss me off/
    i'll leave you suicidal like a Goth/

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    Default Re: yo, check dis shit

    nice drop man, but I would like to see some more creativity go into you're line's, think a lil deeper with the rhyme man, don't just rhyme word's, make the 2 sentence's that you're rhyming connect, keep on droppin line's man, you'll only get better and better, peace.




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  3. #3

    Default Re: yo, check dis shit

    when u rhyme about packin heat n shit, sounds like you are when most arnt, but u might be wearing vests n shit liek that but besides that i felt your bar pattern

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    Default Re: yo, check dis shit

    Quote Originally Posted by S-Man
    yo, like John Cena ya'll can't see me/
    I iz sicker than a hippie on DMT/
    When S-Man steps up in da place/
    I lean back checkin out da fear in ya face/
    Big up London wit da soufside crews/
    fuck wit us, ya bound ta lose/
    packin mad gats, n wearin vests/
    ma crew rulez over tha rest/
    yo, i iz aggressive man, don't piss me off/
    i'll leave you suicidal like a Goth/
    soun like you jus startin out......keep elevatin an if you reppin london come correct bruh......

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