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    Call me an agitator for revolution of great thinkers
    plantin a seed of benaficial fruit for tha infants
    i'm a potential threat to tha stability of your system
    as i alert tha mind-body and soul to its conviction
    from a chaotic intelligence of scientific religion
    flows a destructive impulse in mankind that tempts corruption - out of order
    a radical reformer
    from tha roots in my palm - dark wid my fathers carbon i slaughter
    tha ghostly blue viens wid grey threads
    my voice hot butane flames of hatred - but baggage is hate
    lets say i pack maximum luggage wid action encouraged
    i swing a sword of retribution on this intricate jigsaw i punish
    namely an injured globe - let me remind my inner soul
    fire & brimstone bun Babylons throne my spirit interfolds
    a self appointed funtion as a path finder for my children
    a redemptive figure my nigguh - i keeps it buildin
    skyanties(jamican preacher) i preach fru niyabinghi(african drums) beats its deep
    benieth tha garb of civilisation stands a man wid bronze feet
    arrested and charge for utterin a seditiuos speach
    section 18(criminal offence) ubducted from tha spik on tha streets
    for intent to excite hatred anit-colonial freedom ridin
    tha monsta is dying slaughtered by tha conkering lion
    Abysinnian ripples in tha wind
    currents run deep within tha oestrogen of mother earth
    will we fall a sleep again?
    a question - for shrouded are tha mysteries of African knowledge
    our values mutated by tha persute of profit
    Answer me dis nigga whut can you really do to stop it
    when speakin wid wisdom in tha absence of knowledge -
    i fashion a promise
    Sun af Adam will meet tha creator um honest
    ill put tha blanket of soul on it.................

    ORPHANS OF CUSH

    OUT SOON

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    That was tight no doubt,

    i swing a sword of retribution on this intricate jigsaw i punish
    namely an injured globe - let me remind my inner soul
    fire & brimstone bun Babylons throne my spirit interfolds
    a self appointed funtion as a path finder for my children
    very nice, peace.




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    Quote Originally Posted by SurreaL
    That was tight no doubt,



    very nice, peace.
    good lookin out surreal......

    peaCE

    ORPHANS OF CUSH

    OUT SOON

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    Default Re: Tha Blankit ov my SouL

    keep comin out with hot verses after hot verses

    i cant quote anytin cos each lines resembles greatness

    tru hip hop head

    Bless, 1


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    im about to blow up like seven parts of central london - Khrome Khaliba

    You beatin me is physically and psychological impossible// like paraplegic patients dreamin of walkin horizontal - Khrome Khaliba

    fuk a pregnant bitch my dicks so quik it makes sparks//
    dipped my dik in acid and left the baby with a birthmark - Khrome Khaliba

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    Quote Originally Posted by Knok-A-Fella
    keep comin out with hot verses after hot verses

    i cant quote anytin cos each lines resembles greatness

    tru hip hop head

    Bless, 1
    peace bruh & good lookin out.....i do whut i do and keep doin it.......one

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    ups

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    Default Re: Tha Blankit ov my SouL

    Very complicated in the knowledgeable method. Its an intriguing verse!!!!!!!!!!!
    Nicely placed in the word format and it flowed well, as usual!!!!

    Peace

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    i can't read your work to to your atrocious spellin'... spellin' is important, so you just hang yourself every time you misspell on purpose, it makes you seem illiterate... and unfortunately, i try not to waste me time readin' illiterate text... and could you explain this line to me, 'cause you come off incredibly racist here:

    "section 18 ubducted from tha spik on tha streets"

    personally, i'd read more of your work if you'd just practice good writin' skills... i don't think blatant, purposefully bad grammar makes you look like your from the streets... if anythin', it just makes you look like your tryin' prove the stereotypes that cats from the streets are illterate... honest opinion... if you're gonna try to write intelligent verses, do it intelligently...

    PEACE

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    Quote Originally Posted by PsYkOsUs
    i can't read your work to to your atrocious spellin'... spellin' is important, so you just hang yourself every time you misspell on purpose, it makes you seem illiterate... and unfortunately, i try not to waste me time readin' illiterate text... and could you explain this line to me, 'cause you come off incredibly racist here:

    "section 18 ubducted from tha spik on tha streets"

    personally, i'd read more of your work if you'd just practice good writin' skills... i don't think blatant, purposefully bad grammar makes you look like your from the streets... if anythin', it just makes you look like your tryin' prove the stereotypes that cats from the streets are illterate... honest opinion... if you're gonna try to write intelligent verses, do it intelligently...

    PEACE

    PSY
    Does whut i wrote up there sound like im unintelligent....really?
    I aint gonna fuel tha illiterate part of your feed back, but i hear whut you sayin on tha spellin....
    I only wrote it like that so it would be easy for ppl like your self an others to read it.....

    And theres know need to proove im from tha streets.....niggus who know me where um from know whut time it is.....purposely spellin my verses wrong aint gonna project that um from that streets to anyone....

    As you can see, tha contenet of my verse ain nuin to do wid tha streets....

    Section 18 is a crimminal offence many youths on road are commitin....relatin to causin harm to another by bussin tha skin on a victim.....stabbin...shootins....ect.....

    Cats on tha street aint illiterate, at least those who i network wid.....they quite intelligent and read allot.....and cover allot of subject matter on there on tha mic.....

    Any way...........psykosus.......keep droppin tha feed on my work.......my sword gets sharper every drop........


    By tha way i aint Racist....i eat food of tha same plate as black, white asian.....my block is full of Irish ppl.....and we definately ku.....so dont get me twisted.......



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    i wasn't questionin' the section 18 part, just the 'spik' part, which i assume from your spellin' is "spic"... i hate racist comments, and it looks like you made a racist comment, so i asked you to explain it...

    as far as the spellin' goes: it makes it very difficult to read! not easier... slang is one thing, i'm not tellin' you to use old english... it's just that bad spellin' is just bad spellin'... and if you can't spell, it makes you look illiterate...

    which leads to my next point, which i think you missed: of course the streets are intelligent! we all support hip hop culture which came from the streets... but by purposely usin' bad spellin' doesn't make you look intelligent, it makes you look illiterate... which is misrepresentin' the intelligence found in the streets that we know exists... a lot of "netcees" use bad spellin' because they think it makes them look like they're from the streets, but in fact, it just makes them look stupid... and by usin' that same bad spellin' forces you into that "i'm from the streets, so i'm uneducated" stereotype i'm sure you don't want to be in...

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    Quote Originally Posted by PsYkOsUs
    i wasn't questionin' the section 18 part, just the 'spik' part, which i assume from your spellin' is "spic"... i hate racist comments, and it looks like you made a racist comment, so i asked you to explain it...

    as far as the spellin' goes: it makes it very difficult to read! not easier... slang is one thing, i'm not tellin' you to use old english... it's just that bad spellin' is just bad spellin'... and if you can't spell, it makes you look illiterate...

    which leads to my next point, which i think you missed: of course the streets are intelligent! we all support hip hop culture which came from the streets... but by purposely usin' bad spellin' doesn't make you look intelligent, it makes you look illiterate... which is misrepresentin' the intelligence found in the streets that we know exists... a lot of "netcees" use bad spellin' because they think it makes them look like they're from the streets, but in fact, it just makes them look stupid... and by usin' that same bad spellin' forces you into that "i'm from the streets, so i'm uneducated" stereotype i'm sure you don't want to be in...
    Listen bruh....my purpose for tha way i spell my words is not for an "im from tha streets title"......tha way i spell my words is how i write it on paper......and it jus happens to be how i type it...

    I cuddnt care less who thinks um from tha streets....if the way i type shit up makes you think um from tha streets then so be it.....


    Like i sed...you ain from my parts and i ain from yours...so only tha niggus i net work wid ned to know whuts good......

    spic - isnt a rascist remark from where um from......so i guess its a miscommunication.....coz i aint rascist....i eat wid white folk who zone on tha same wave length as me......

    enuf of this shit now.....about my spellin...it aint a big deal anyway...you too picky mayne.....definately a certisfied asshole......

    peace

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    "Main Entry: spick
    Variant(s):
    or spic or spik /'spik/
    Function: noun
    Etymology: by shortening & alteration from spiggoty, of unknown origin
    Date: 1916
    usually offensive :
    SPANISH AMERICAN "

    but you still missed my point... it's okay... i wasn't tryin' to argue with you... everything i say here leads to an arguement... LOL... if i say: "Hi!", i get: "Fuck You, and leave me alone you arrogant bastard!" as a response...

    PEACE

    PSY



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    Quote Originally Posted by PsYkOsUs
    "Main Entry: spick
    Variant(s): or spic or spik /'spik/
    Function: noun
    Etymology: by shortening & alteration from spiggoty, of unknown origin
    Date: 1916
    usually offensive :
    SPANISH AMERICAN "

    but you still missed my point... it's okay... i wasn't tryin' to argue with you... everything i say here leads to an arguement... LOL... if i say: "Hi!", i get: "Fuck You, and leave me alone you arrogant bastard!" as a response...

    PEACE

    PSY

    aight bruh....we gonna drop this one till tha nex verse.....

    peace

    ORPHANS OF CUSH

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