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    Default theorists

    just a quik 16

    something that was on my mind

    u hear me on the mic but u dont understand it
    buildin 7 detonated from inside i dont understand it
    jus like september 11th the towers were built to withstand it
    they crumbled like granite the greatest monument on the planet
    illuminati planned it it was a conspiracy
    so the nutcases were caught who believe in the sordid theories
    turn there backs on reality but they still had there queries
    but were afraid to ask questions cos the answers were eerie
    now that they call it ground zero its a fukin tragedy
    dismembered body parts plummetin wit the help of gravity
    but obviously im infinte like sexual depravity
    and hard hittin like the rules of relativity
    at the beginnin of it all there was two supreme powers
    that came to this world eruptin like volcanic showers
    the cold blooded killers and the ones that devour
    every single human soul who in there hearts are cowards

    As always criticism appreciated

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    u hear me on the mic but u dont understand it
    buildin 7 detonated from inside i dont understand it
    jus like september 11th the towers were built to withstand it
    they crumbled like granite the greatest monument on the planet
    illuminati planned it it was a conspiracy
    so the nutcases were caught who believe in the sordid theories
    That was nice, alway's write what's on you're mind, you never know what you'll get, keep writin man, peace.




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    aight kool
    surreal

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    my style and flow is dark like afghanistan dungeons//
    im about to blow up like seven parts of central london - Khrome Khaliba

    You beatin me is physically and psychological impossible// like paraplegic patients dreamin of walkin horizontal - Khrome Khaliba

    fuk a pregnant bitch my dicks so quik it makes sparks//
    dipped my dik in acid and left the baby with a birthmark - Khrome Khaliba

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    I Liked This Verse Too, It Made Some Sense To Me

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    decent from off tha top....keep em cummin......

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    Default Re: theorists

    Tight verse , quite some knowledge there, few would dare to express in such a manner, and well place also- not the general stereo type kind !!!

    Peace

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    Pretty Good, id say work on smoothin out the flow some.. some of the lines need more or less words... You did stay on topic tho.. not to bad overall

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    it was just something that was in my head at that moment

    Bless for the criticism

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    my style and flow is dark like afghanistan dungeons//
    im about to blow up like seven parts of central london - Khrome Khaliba

    You beatin me is physically and psychological impossible// like paraplegic patients dreamin of walkin horizontal - Khrome Khaliba

    fuk a pregnant bitch my dicks so quik it makes sparks//
    dipped my dik in acid and left the baby with a birthmark - Khrome Khaliba

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