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    Exclamation <<<Big Risk's Risky Business Thread>>>

    Im about to get fucking ANGRY
    my razor sharp vocals cut through the rope when ya try to hang me.
    Blood stain me. Ill just laugh
    you just another dead motha fucka addin up like math.
    you get slashed, Slain down by the divine sword of Allah.
    i leave you fucked up and shitty like a bathroom stall.
    lets brawl. crack ya glass jaw.
    and the smalla they are, the easier they fall.
    And im bigga, And im about to smash you.
    blast you, send 6 past you. and unmask you.
    reveling ya bitch self.
    intoxicatin ya health, with sick flows.
    producin more aids than white labmens, betta yet six hoes.
    Youre washed up like the ideas of euality
    i fall you fallwit me.
    and die wit me.
    cry wit me, because when im hurt youre hurt.
    when i get hot, you get burnt.

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    Default Re: New single im working on. first verse

    Its rough and tight (no mercy for the other guys). Nice verse, i suppose you were busting on this verse.

    Peace
    PS: Keep posting

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    Default Re: New single im working on. first verse

    thanks man, yeah, I kept it serious on this one, never really spit like this EVER.

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    Default ok, I took lines from frees and battles i made.

    And i made a verse for a new song im recording, tell me what you think. Critiques please.

    My blood runs straight from italy.
    none of ya faggots mean shit ta me.
    Ill knock your seed out and perform a vasectomy.
    You could never figure me out even if you disected me.
    Ill murder your whole family just so God will have respect for me.
    Life perfected me.
    Now Im the ultra being.
    I got 4 eyes metophorically,I'm ultra seeing.
    Ill devour your whole mental, as if I was jeffrey dahma.
    Got crazed and twisted thoughts, like a terroristc bomba.
    slice ya body up like muh fuckin beef at benihanas.
    feed ya remains to paranahs.
    I sit back and ponda.
    what is the reason why everything fucked.
    Why did my pops smoke pot conceaving me, puffed.
    sucks, maybe thats why i grew up so demented.
    keepin flows stucked in my head,thoughts cemented.
    I have to have contintment. Or less Im lost.
    Confusing like robert frost.
    Hard life is what its cost.
    Fuck this, I cant be procrastinate
    I cant be second place I must muh fuckin master it.
    take my style and bastard it. no one could copy even if they fuckin captured it.
    My raps imaculent. You sit back and become impressed.
    question my style faggot, you get addressed.
    Never rap apon request.
    I keep it simple.
    dumb shitheads talking shit to the point i pot them mother fuckers like pimples.
    punch they head creatin dimples. I keep it dirty.
    Go head, pull ya guns, it cant hurt me.
    ya childish threats dont alert me.

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    Default Re: ok, I took lines from frees and battles i made.

    its alright man......it sounds like a freestyle.....if u work on it for awhile the shit will be tight......i like the first 10 lines or so the best......"u couldnt figure me out if u disected me".....thats some cool shit. keep tearin shit uuuup, peeaace
    "BACK TO FUKIN WERK 1 OF YOUR THREADZ JUST GOT DUSTED"

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    Default Re: ok, I took lines from frees and battles i made.

    Confusing like robert frost.



    damn dat line is pretty sick... i have 2 admit.... overall ... nice shit...


    bring da mutha fucken ruckus!


    peace !!!
    BLAZE IT !!!

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    Default Re: ok, I took lines from frees and battles i made.

    Your flow actually reads really smooth. Your rhymes are good and your vocabs aite too.. i find your lines to be somewhat bland tho.. i dunno.. still i think that overall this was an pretty decent piece

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    Default Re: ok, I took lines from frees and battles i made.

    thanks guys, peace

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    Default Re: ok, I took lines from frees and battles i made.

    It's decent

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    Default Re: ok, I took lines from frees and battles i made.

    I spit it in audio, i dunno, I can get my breath quite easily. Sep for like one part i have to go for just a little bit longer. thanks for the feedguys, peace.

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    Default Re: ok, I took lines from frees and battles i made.


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    Default Re: ok, I took lines from frees and battles i made.

    Nice... for having it put together like a quilt

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    Default Untitled, just wrote this.

    Sorry for any typos.



    Big Risk the realest
    so bad the CIA fear us
    everyday villians take billions
    teachin children how to rip mics and make millions
    puffin gars like scilians, bombin buildins.
    we speak of real things.
    its cold world son, with sex, blood, bills and pill fiends
    ......life will make you wanna kill things.
    Drugs will make you steal things
    and change you mental sceme
    broken dreams of making cream
    down the drain
    the pains feuled by the rain
    and when it rains it pours so its hard to maintain.
    stress will crash your mainframe.
    problems big like a great dane.
    ......some are goals unatainable.
    My hate is unexplainable.
    my thoughts are unpaintable.
    im uncapable of fuckin over people close to me.
    thats how it suposed to be, im only hoping g that hopefully my kids will catch on listen carefully and grow from me.
    lifes a bitch she choking me.
    I ask God if he jokin me.
    .....cause honestly i cant believe shit.
    im chained to hip hop i cant leave it.
    .....this shits Essential like i breathe it.

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    Im like deaths epiphany
    I take lives and cause misery
    Rule infinity, and drank blood for centuries
    Im underground, hell bound you beat down and not found
    Itís hot now?
    You get burnt afta the hammer pounds
    Gun sounds that be my nightly music
    My crews sick, hit you wit the bird or nightstick
    An ice pick, or whatever death ya wife picks
    You p---- wet f-----s get crushed and might miss, your one opportunity to run home wit pant piss.
    You insect, my flow infects your intellect.
    Aint no fret, you p---ies just dyin to get wet
    F--- sets, my shot leave you flyin like jets
    Disrespect, and thatís the reason deaths in effect.
    Connect teks to ya necks, leave ya spine on church steps
    Next, rappas trying to murder my style
    Im free to scrap, murder fags rockin a smile.
    Im vile, cats layed out like floor tiles
    You bitch my boys hear you cryin from four miles away
    End ya life but ya girl can stay, I got plans
    It consist of trains and gangbangs
    Simple and plain, you knocked the fuck out of the mainframe
    Im cruel, but thatís the way the devil plays the pain game
    Im lethargic, your whole f----- crew is a target
    Barge in, knock ya whole world off the margin.
    Big risk the death sergeant
    Saw spinnin, blood splash stains my Lenin
    You f---, you talk shit in the beginning and now you shook?
    Thatís the oldest trick in the book.
    You scared, so scared you can barely look, crook.
    My hate my blatantly obvious.
    My shots hot, so hot you swear that lava hit
    Born straight out of hells lava pit.
    You talk alota shit but wont do shit against alota spics.
    You pricks, might aswell quit before Im pissed
    Big Risk 2006.

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    Barge in, knock ya whole world off the margin.
    Big risk the death sergeant

    I like this cert the most

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