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    Default Rise toward clarity

    Just a short one.

    My rhyme entwine divine shine in your mind,
    with energy sent to me by a heavenly entity,
    crossing the boundary of reality to find truth,
    not fighting against the evil you see is a felacy,
    minds put to use,my thoughts are poetic,
    to real for the mass synthetic,
    leaving unsaid whats ment to be,instead of fake imagery,
    devise a way to rise toward clarity.

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    Default Re: Rise toward clarity

    Ill word wizardy

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    Default Re: Rise toward clarity

    this was a good verse, and had a lot of knowledge there-short but devastating. Quite versatile, besides your other verses. You got some skill developing.

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    Ur Techniques R Pretty Good....... Good Wisdom.......


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    NICE keep it up mann

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